Awesome update!! π. Keechu you are fantastic. I was thinking of different scenario. Naughty Swayam..π HA !HA!HA!
Please update fast.. Sharon should wake up and sneak out. ππ Please i cant bear the suspense.
Awesome update!! π. Keechu you are fantastic. I was thinking of different scenario. Naughty Swayam..π HA !HA!HA!
Please update fast.. Sharon should wake up and sneak out. ππ Please i cant bear the suspense.
Originally posted by: --lavanya--
Awesome Mishti Di
Man ! I can't wait to read more π³This is so interesting ...loved it ! πIf possible pls Update Soon ! π³
Originally posted by: existentialism
This was great. Although I hoped for some Swaron conversations, still enjoyed the update. Him checking out Kritika, that guy has some nerve!!. Swayam Pia conversation was cute. Loved how he hurriedly went near Sharon when she fainted. Now, I desperately wanna know how the changed Sharon will react to this Swayam.
It was just awesome...ππΌ
Finally he is realising the need of her in his so called messed up lifeHe does love her but his ego...pls update soon cant wait...π
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
This was an awesome update!!!...Swayam and Sharon part was written beautifully!.. my favorite line..."She was mine and she will be mine!"...And he still doesn't know he loves her!..π...Hopefully uski dimaag ki batti jaldi jalegi!..Wonder how Sharon is going to give him a taste of his own medicine.. Swayam's gonna have tough time winning her again!..
Update soon!..
Originally posted by: mythreyii
Hey keechu
Beautiful update jus loved it
The first word in my mind after reading the update is perfect
From the start to end it was amazing
Loved swaron meet bit could not have been better
The conflict between swayums swayums mind and heart was well penned
"No man touches my Sharon" highlight of the update..
Glad to c the ff active
Beautiful update
Jus amazing writer u are
Great job awaiting next update
swayam ka pov (not so happy bcz ye banda na bhot galt sochta hai sharon ke bare me)
but it was good like to know his pov too πnd happy his heart is on sharon's side πswayam and checking out kritika π²but he got zip up front of her ππpia knows swayam and her guessing seen was amazingly cuteπswaron meet (barso se yintjar tha)par she fainted π²by shockpar acha hua faint hui nahi toh concern na hoke sharon ko vapus kaise manana hai voh bhi taani ke happiness ke liye ye sochtaπ‘loved swayam's concern sideβΊοΈππthank you so much for updating πand WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY DIWALIπ
Originally posted by: anjuvrushan
I feel bad for swayam...his is always having conflicts between his heart nd brains..nd thats the most difficult situation in anyones life...better get things cleared swayam...
Keechu...loved the update...nd yes i liked swayam admiring the changed sharon...
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