Sharon is hurt...
And a new character pia..seems interesting
Plz update as soon as possible...and keep writing 😊
Originally posted by: lavanyalaa0
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Me first to comment..!!! yayyy...!!...
@ani--👎🏼 hehe...tui second...jole chai hoy jas na abar...keechu di'r scrap pechilam tai 1st eschi...hehe..😛😛😛
.{ this is fr ani ignore this di }
now coming to the third chappy..
swayam wanted to avoid the convo on sharon..
but rey being the bst buddy knws vry well wat's good fr him..
i donno how can 'ego' win over 'heart'...
i'm sure it'll never...n also hope to see that soon..
I liked these lines" love, the most beautiful yet desirous feeling."
Why is swayam so bad here..?
it doesn't suit him right...
i hated his character more when he said that sharon was an orphan and so she's different from taani...he's too bad..😭😭
i really liked Rey's character till now...he's doing all he can do to bring his frnd on the right path..
The flashback shows that swayam had always been spacing himself frm sharon..
i really wanna knw why...
"pia" seems to bring some happiness in the story..😃
as of knw swayam's character is totally confusing...
he is guilty...he has a striking conscience...
but inspite of that he's behaving the other way..
i hope i'll get my answers soon...
thanks for pm..
as always beautifully written piece...
pls pls update soon..!!..
Lavanya
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