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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wht d hell is wrong with swayam??
it was so emotional
awesome update
Even i dont know dear😆
Thank u so much 😃
Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wht d hell is wrong with swayam??
it was so emotional
awesome update
Originally posted by: taareyswarond3
Res...
-unreserve-
Have all the writer's on IF who write on SwaRon have decided to make ppl cry or what???
What have you written!!!
I'm crying while writing all this(first chap)...
So much of pain!!
And the song!!
My god!!!
SwaRon have to go through pain right to be together...
Someone has to hurt the other in the SwaRon story...
Swayam is the bad guy now...
Sharon is hurt one...
Okay so ill go step wise...
Rishi is angry with Swayam... Swayam feels he isn't wrong... Taani is upset with her bro... Taarey engagement... Swayam has hurt some girl who's apparently rishi's bahu and taani's baabi...
Perfectly written all these events...
The emotions were brought out so well... As I already said I'm crying...
The unnamed girl is broken coz she's hurt...
Love has hurt her...
Again loved the potrayal of that scene...
Especially when she screams...
Amazingly written!!
Your writing, your characters,your story!!!
No words to describe the awesomeness of it...
In other words your awesome!!!
Loving the whole thing!!!
Pls update quickly...
Cant wait more!!!
hadn't commented during the prologue and Cs ...sorry for that... But better late than never right ;)
Originally posted by: taareyswarond3
Res 2
-unreserved-
The second chap...
Angel's heaven... This name my god!! I'm in love with the name...
Sharon is hurt... Now a transformation in her that she is angry...
Simmi a true friend :)
Again when she said Sharon SHEKHAWAT I couldn't stop grinning ^__^
Swayam dancing to take out his frustration :)
The confession was cute... Sabke saamne in public ^_^
Taani is such a concerned sis... And Rey too good friend...
Swayam has done something... Something really wrong... LEAVING Sharon
But why??? His past maybe??? He doesn't trust women??? He used her!!! But how??? And for what??
Shes an orphan what can she do??? Why is Swayam like this???
So many questions 😆
But answer's for which v'll have to wait and read on ur future updates:)
Lovely chap...!!!
Beautiful writing ^__^
Update soon... And from now on u'll get regular comments from me :)
Finally I'm up to date with the story 😆
Loving it... Awesome stuff 😃
Amazing writing ^__^
Continue soonish 😉
-love anagha ^__^
Originally posted by: Princess.S786
Awesome update
Feel so bad for Sharon
Thanks for pm
Originally posted by: Anapneo3003
awesome part👏
lovedd simi's pov here😳love how she cares for sharon😳continue soonish😊
Originally posted by: Nicky-nish
Fab update
Nd emotional too...
Swayam z hurtng sharon nd himself too...
nd sharon z cryng bcz of him nd smilng bcz of him...
Dis story z mkng me curious nw...
I jst cnt wt to read nxt part
Update asap
Thnx fr pm
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