nw coming to the update, it ws amazing...
Loved it !!
I wonder why swayam left sharon !!
Update soon nd thanks fr the pm
Originally posted by: flyinghigh_ani
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unresthis update was again super awesum...πππ (do i need to say that?? )i like how u include different person's perspectives...in this case it was simmi's...loved it..in general , as characters i always (right from d3 days) relate to swayam morethan i could to sharon...here also teh same thing... sharon loves him..smiled because of him but is angry... so apt...but i related to swayam more...the way he is confused... the way he tries to convince himself that he is right although deep down he knws he is not... love this shade of him...although swayam is not a very good person( as of now) but i still love him...love ani...
Originally posted by: Starsfireflies
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unres
fab part..
swayam left sharon..
i wonder why?
will be waiting fr the answer!!π
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Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity
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Unreserve..I know I'm super late to unserve..Sorry.. :)Now coming to the update, Awesome..As I have said before, I really sympathize Swayam's character in this FF..Simmi's POV was really well written..And I'm loving the you are maintaining the suspense of this story..Thank you so much for the PM and do update soon.. :)
Originally posted by: aneesha93
Awesome update. Swaron are already marriedπ²π². Loved how you expressed Swayam's feelings through his dance. Can't wait to know what happened in their lives. Thanks for the pm. Update soon.
Originally posted by: lavanyalaa0
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unres
You are an amazing writer !!π
i can always imagine swaron in your writing..
coming to chap 2 , it was full of emotions...
if sharon is there in swayam's dreams and she not being beside him makes him distressed , then y did he send her away ?π
The way you penned down swayam's inner turmoil through dance is really commendable...ππΌ
i liked simmi's pov, she's a true friend..
As you mentioned , yes, i did like sharon's transformation..
Sharon standing for herself is something that really suits her ...π
but now i'm more interested to knw what made swayam do that to sharon...
i hope that you unleash the mystery soon,,,
thanks for pm..
and yes update soon ...ππΌ
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Both are hurt deeply..
Bt why swayam is doing all this??
Emotional kar diya yaar..
Thanks 4 d pm
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