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its so emotional update. keechu u r brillant dr. i am in love wit this ff. thank you for pm

again a nice and apt update uncovering only that much of the story so that it can only grow the reader's curiosity for the next update...very well written...simmi's flashback was nice...sharon smiling due to him and sad due to him at the same time...nicely written...thanks for the pm

Hats off my dear...awesme update...the pain ,guilt everything ws penned nicely...really nice...

Awesome update. Swaron are already married😲😲. Loved how you expressed Swayam's feelings through his dance. Can't wait to know what happened in their lives. Thanks for the pm. Update soon.

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You are an amazing writer !!👏
i can always imagine swaron in your writing..
coming to chap 2 , it was full of emotions...
if sharon is there in swayam's dreams and she not being beside him makes him distressed , then y did he send her away ?😭
The way you penned down swayam's inner turmoil through dance is really commendable...👍🏼
i liked simmi's pov, she's a true friend..
As you mentioned , yes, i did like sharon's transformation..
Sharon standing for herself is something that really suits her ...😊

but now i'm more interested to knw what made swayam do that to sharon...
i hope that you unleash the mystery soon,,,

thanks for pm..
and yes update soon ...👍🏼

Both are hurt deeply..

Bt why swayam is doing all this??

Emotional kar diya yaar..

Thanks 4 d pm

wht d hell is wrong with swayam??
it was so emotional

awesome update

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-unreserve-
Have all the writer's on IF who write on SwaRon have decided to make ppl cry or what???
What have you written!!!
I'm crying while writing all this(first chap)...
So much of pain!!
And the song!!
My god!!!
SwaRon have to go through pain right to be together...
Someone has to hurt the other in the SwaRon story...
Swayam is the bad guy now...
Sharon is hurt one...
Okay so ill go step wise...
Rishi is angry with Swayam... Swayam feels he isn't wrong... Taani is upset with her bro... Taarey engagement... Swayam has hurt some girl who's apparently rishi's bahu and taani's baabi...
Perfectly written all these events...
The emotions were brought out so well... As I already said I'm crying...
The unnamed girl is broken coz she's hurt...
Love has hurt her...
Again loved the potrayal of that scene...
Especially when she screams...
Amazingly written!!
Your writing, your characters,your story!!!
No words to describe the awesomeness of it...
In other words your awesome!!!
Loving the whole thing!!!
Pls update quickly...
Cant wait more!!!
hadn't commented during the prologue and Cs ...sorry for that... But better late than never right ;)