Originally posted by: Starsfireflies
it was confusing..
btw I love the song😆sharon is broken coz of swayam??😲waiting fr next!!very well written😃
Originally posted by: Starsfireflies
it was confusing..
btw I love the song😆sharon is broken coz of swayam??😲waiting fr next!!very well written😃
A very emotional update
But ya as u said it did clear some confusionBut swaron are married😲And swayam used herBut why??Update next part quickly😊
Originally posted by: aneesha93
Awesome chapter😊. The song was apt for the situation. Am still a little unclear about the situation. Hopefully, the next chapter will clear it out for me.
Would love to see a negative side of Swayam (though at the end it will end up being a good one). Do continue with the characterization you have planned. Bad Swayam + determined Sharon will be entertaining. Update the next part soon. Thanks for the pm & also for converting this SS into an FF
Originally posted by: VruShanite
Awesomee chapter...emotional scene was very well written...update super fast...
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Swayam's pov is well penned..
No one listens him..bad...
But his dad cares a lot...
Good
Is that girl sharon??
I think so..
Update soon
Thanks 4 d pm
Originally posted by: Hp_TvD_mAnIc
wow aswom update
loved it.. its nice ...
sharon is strong...
lets see
update jaldi
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Originally posted by: Jasmine_ash
Kitu kitu beautiful dear
Actually reading prologue I thought everyone misunderstood SWAYAMBut reading this update particularly seeing Taani and Sharon reaction I hope SWAYAM had done something wrongFirst I thought swaron r not together I mean not connected but u fabulously twisted showing SWAYAM dad and Taani feeling for SharonSo swaron married omgSWAYAM bad boy that's really difficult for me to take yet if story go head and rock itPls reveal what is going onThanks for pmNext update soon
Originally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..
well written and very emotional
wanna know what was this mistake swayam committedlooking forward to read morelove *_*
Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786
Awesome prologue, cs and an amazing start 👏
Loved it...can't wait 4 u to continue 😛
superbly written...sorry 4 the late comment 😳
Thanks 4 the pm 😊
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