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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

res...

unres...

okay , FIRST of all let me tell you that i absolutely love that song 'tanhayee'... so this update became even more special for me...

as i read teh first line of teh song i started singing it n my mom was like please stop this torture...😭😭...she called my singing torture...😭😭... no one understands my talent...😭...well leaving aside my sad story...

more than my liking for the song i wonder i perfectly you included it in your chapter... as you said it perfectly went with the situation...so STANDING OVATION for that selection...👏👏

SECOND , the storyline is so gripping that i guarantee u from now on , not only me but every reader of yours will be waiting for your PM... so you better update soon or else we plan on attacking you...😆😆...

THIRD , the way you write makes me bang my head on a wall thinking why on EARTH this girl has not written any FF before this... the way you changed POV's... showed swayam's restlessness... sharon's pain... taani's unbiased opinion and dad's anger yet concern... HATS OFF...👏👏

as you know swayam is my favourite but still have to say here he is behaving like a retard fool...😡😡

n sorry that i got angry on his dad... he is basically right... let swayam get a taste of his own medicine... STUPID BOY...

SO BASICALLY MY DEMAND IS UPDATE SOON...

PS: i don't feel ashamed to admit that you are a far better writer than me...😃...

lots of love...

ANI

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Selina

@Princess.S786

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Awesome update
Swayam is a bad boy😲
Really emotional chapter
Continue soon

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Shradha

@ShradhaP13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

It is really very well written

totally impressed...

Swayam and Sharon married

Do continue soon...

Waiting...😊

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

this is superb

loved this concept..plot seems interesting

m excited

update soon

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Great start..

Taarey are engaged that's nice.

So It looks like Swayam has broken Sharon's heart..

Swayam's dad and Taani both are against Swayam.

Tanhayi song perfectly blends with Current situation.

Poor Sharon she is so hurt.

Waiting for next update..

Update soon.

-Shivani

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gsk4

@gsk4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Very emotional storyline. Well written. 👏 Impatient to read whats going to happen next.. Please update soon. 😃

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity
Res.
Unreserved.
Yess.. Me first one to comment. As I realized I had not commented on the prolouge and CS. I had to make up for it.😉
The prologue was quite confusing.
This chapter cleared a bit of air, but the mystery is not completely solved yet.
The "Angel's Heaven" part, I understood after reading the character sketch one more time. I guess it's the orphanage where Sharon was living.
And SwaRon are already married.
I love this bad boy Swayam. And I don't know why but I kinda sympathize this character more than Sharon. (I know I'm sounding crazy ) No ones listening to his POV. That is quite bad. I really would love to read what Swayam actually did and his POV too. And he is all alone. I believe he too has his reasons for whatever he did.
Loved the song part. The emotions, be it Sharon's or Swayam's were beautiful
Do continue soon and yes do PM me.
(P.S. I commented this time before you even sent PM to me. 😃)

Thanku so much dear 😃

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: anum_6
Res/unresits amazing update
I know swayum did something wrong but what relieved soon
Sharon is shoo shattered 😭
Taarey is engaged but y everyone is so sad
Please update soon
Thnx for pm

Love :)
Anum

Thanku so much 😃

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003
awesome plot cs and d update👏
amazingly penned👏
continue soonish😳

Thanku dear 😃

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Frozen_Flames
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amazing update didu!!
So swayam has done something wrong...
Nd its looking like swayu is a bad boy...
Interesting !!
Update soon snd thnks fr the pm

Thanku dear 😃

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