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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

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First of all amazing Banner 👏, Intense one...

@ psychobaiko. Great work dear...

Goosshhh

Nishii this is amazing...👏

i never used to read loudly, i always read in my mind but for the first time i read it loudly gosh,,,it made such an impact on me ... awesome writing... appreciating use of words...i was reliving those scene which took my heart that day and today ur this work did...it made me to realize how deeply swaron effect us on our life...

I miss them😭... I never thought this form swayam's side...they showed as sharon's feelings but from swayam its brilliant...

i love the part most where swayam's feeling..the start...that was very well written...👍🏼...

Amazing 👏

~Keechu

Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago

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Ria

@riachawlalko

Explorer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

wow...amazing piece of work
i really enjoy reading sad one shots...dnt know why bt i do
n everytym i read one such os...my interest grows further n when the os is written by you...its like a cherry on the cake
loved it :)
beautifully described emotions
this tym more than swayams pov i liked sharon's pov
all in all...it was a gr8 os
keep writing more
n thanks fr d pm :)

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

Navigator

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

P.s- I adore the Banner❤️

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

iam missin swaron more after reading this..

reminded me of the old days.

i can't handle the cold swayam..

and sharon ouch..her ego hurts..

it pains to see her..i feel pitied..

swayam's words were harsh..

she's realised her mistake

abnd determined to get him back..

that soothes...

thnx for the pm

keep writing nish...

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

This is how I had imagined this scene to be in fact we all had.

Sharon's determination to win her love back would have been an altogether different angel and it would prove that Sharon was worth all the love and the struggle Swayam made.

Both of their perspectives are beautifully incorporated 👏👏 Congratulations and well done girl.

It was a brilliant piece of work. 😊

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