How beautiful you are at writing so many emotions of life so deeply and heart wrenchingly!
Man, this was an extremely perfect example of amazing writing, pouring emotions through the use of words.
Well, I being a Sadist, loved the one shot to the core. It was so full of pain & agony.
Sharon being a strong girl was facing every pierce those needles bought to her with a smile on her face, just for Swayam. She knew she had to be brave & face the truth the way that is. Not giving fake words & promises to Swayam, rather asking him to be strong at heart to accept that yes she is gonna leave the world soon.
Swayam, his emotion, his heart, his life was tearing apart. His world had trembled upside down. Those emotions of being away from the love of his love- you have penned it so beautifully.
Keep writing.
-Ayushi
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