welcome back dear
i liked the sotry sequence and the way you displayed taani and rey's character and
there bdf to frienship
for me the story is perfect and no need to change
even loved taani sharon and taayam bond
am a taayam fan too so i loved to see taayam apart from taarey
just my feedback.. but as you r writer you know what is best
pls. try to cont soon
and all the best for ur studies
Edited by dh19 - 9 years ago
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