Heya there, mon amie! This is another splendid chapter! I remember i told you about making your chapters more interesting to engage readers. believe me, it's already more interesting. Nope, no flattery. if u don't mind, i have sth to share. My English teacher ( you - know - who sir) told me in order to make your writing better imagine yourself in the place of the character. i know very cliche advice but it works wonders. imagine the sensations, expressions asurroundings. I hope it helps you. if not , i m sorry for my excessive rambling!
P.S. No, Voldemort didn't teach me English.
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