Originally posted by: CrazyForAmar
Awesome update
You have written it very nicelyAnd yup...it was just Taarey in this updateAll their talkes were amazingSpecially...Their talk at the endLocker room and pani puri partsWere also amazingCONTINUE SOON
Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR
Chapter #1
Wow...awesome start!Very nicely written :)Loved Taani's relationship with her dadShe is friends with SwaRon :)SwaRon getting irritated when Rey calls them 'lovebirds' πRey jealous of Taani π€£Very lovely :)
Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR
Chapter #2
Superb part!Loved both TaaRey POVTaani's dad cares for her so muchRey bickering with SwaRon π...he had to go pick Taani up :)Taani thought he was a driver π€£...loved their nok jhok
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