TaaRey New OS **Nahi Laage Jeeya Tere bin**

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello all.
Back wth a Os
Dont b suprised.
pinkytekwani
Requested an Os on tis song.
So i wrote.
I hope u lke tis dr :) :*

~~~Nahi laage jeeya Tere bin~~~
Taani checked herself in Mirror.
She looks extremely gorgeous in that red Heavy Stone Work Anarkali.
TTH:
Hey krishna ji.
Itna heavy Anakarli???
Isse phen ke dance kese karon mein?
Ye badi dadi bhi na?
ufff..
Sab uss ki vajase.
Hmmm
She pouted..
She put khol on her eyes.
Placed a lil bindi on her forehead.
She took a heavy long ear ring n wore that.
She took the stone white n red combo bangles n wore that too.
She finished the touch up .
T:Perfect
Juzz then the door got opened.
She turned n stared their.
Swayam stood their with a smile.
Sw:Suprise...
Taani is overwhelmed by his presence.
T:Bhaai.
She rushed towards him .
Swayam stood their with a plastered smile.
She hugged him tightly.
Swayam hugged her back.
Itz been 2 years since they actually meet.
Taani pulled back from hug.
Swayam smiled at her.
T:Bha.i. aap saach mein yahan..
Sw:haan.Kese ho tum?
T:Ek dum mast...I thought u wont come for tis family reunion.
Sw:Aare yese kese??
Hamara family ka na?
T:Haan bhai.
Par aap Apni academy ka saath busy thi ..
So
Swayam smiled.
Sw:Mein itna bhi busy nai hoon.
Aur vaise bhi Rey ne force kiya ...
He stopped in mid.
A smile in Taani's face faded.
Swayam noticed her expression.
Rey...
The name she try to forget every single day but still she Can't..
The name which was meant to b a World for her early.
The name which still has an impact even after her break up.
Her eyes r filled with tears.
An awkward silence filled in air.
Neither Swayam nor Taani spoke anything
Soon Taani compose herself.
T:bha..i..Aap baaki sab se milona?
Mein touch up karke aathi hun.
Swayam can see the pain in her eyes.
Sw:Taani..Mein.
T:Im Fine bhai.
A stern reply came.
Sw:ok Taani.
All the best for ur performance.
Taani smiled at him.
T:Thanx bhai.
He left the room.
But Taani's Mind was only filled with his Memories.
Her Rey's memories.
Her Rey?
Did she thought like that.
Her Rey??
Nope.
He can't b hers now.
She closed her eyes.
The images of hers n Rey's Lovely moments came infront of her eyes.
The hug.
The feel ..
The Touch.
She opened her eyes.
TTH:
No.
i cant b so weak.
I broke up with him.
Itz been 2 years.
He must found a new girl.
How can i think about him?
I shouldn't.
She wiped her tears.
Juzz then sejal her cousin came inside.
S:Taani ..
Taani faked a smile.
S:kya kar rahi h.
performance ka time hogaya h.
Everyone is waiting for u
T:haan ...coming ...
She came out of the room ..
She came to the hall there she finds her entire family assembled.
She came near her badi dadi n took her blessings.
D:Bohoth pyaari lag rahi Taani.
Taani smiled at her.
Her eyes searched Swayam.
He was sitting with her another cousin.
He gestured her all the bst.
She smiled n nodded.
Soon she came to the centre stage.
The enrire hall is filled wth dark
Lime light fell on her ..
She closed her eyes.
But she got flashes of Rey .
His smile.
His Teasing nature.
His anger.
His proximity.
Somehave she felt that the song is for Rey.
Soon the music starts.
Kesariya balam aavonee
Padharonee mhare Des
Maari ghoomar chhe nakharaali re
maa
Mane ghoomar ramvan gyasa

Taani swirled lightly doing kathak.


Raatein ab nahi dhadakti
Din bhi saansein nahin lete
Ab toh aa jaao mere soneya...

She got the flashes of their First hug..
She Swriled her hands.

Baatein keh gayi zaroori
Mere labon pe adhuri
Aake sunn jaao mere soneya...

She got flashes of their first kiss.


Tere bin nahi laage jiya
Tere bin... ab to aaja piya
Tere bin... nahi laage jiya...Tere bin.

She did the floor posture balancing her kneels


Pehle jaise mausam bhi aate nahi
hai
Barishon mein pehle jaisi baatein
nahi hai

She remembered their first kiss

Pehle jaise mausam bhi aate nahi
hai
Barishon mein pehle jaisi baatein
nahi hai
Sookhe sookhe jazbaat khali khali
mere
Haathon ki lakeerein bulaave
soneya...

She got flashes of their first date

Tere bin nahi laage jiyaa
Tere bin... ab to aaja piyaa
Tere bin... nahi laage jiyaa... Tere
bin

she got flashes of their cozy moments


Raanjha mera sab toh sona
Jise jaane khul jaaye
Maine toh band kar diya
Saawariyaan ke naal


She got flashes of their break up


Chaand bhi wahi hai, wahi hai sitare
Tere baad phike phike lagte hai
saare
Chaand bhi wahi hai, wahi hai sitare
Tere baad phike phike lagte hai
saare
Aaja leke tu sawere kar ja door yeh
andhere

She got flashes of their last meet n hug.

Teri Doorie tadpaave soneya...
Tere bin nahi laage jiyaa
Tere bin... ab to aaja piyaa
Tere bin... nahi laage jiyaa
Tere Bin...
Tere bina laage naa jiya
Morey piya, ab to aaja re morey piya
Ab to aaja re morey piyaa
Ab to aaja re morey piya

She swirled n ended wth a posture.
Tear drop escaped from her eyes.
She opened her eyes n is shocked ...
Rey is standing infront of her.
She thought itz her hallucination ...
She closed her eyes.
TTH:
wat happened to me?
y im hallucinating him?
Tis cant b done.
y i remembering him again n again.
But her chain of thoughts r disturbed by a voice.
R:Taani...Aakhne kolo
She opened her eyes in aghast.
He is actually standing infront of her.
R:Ye sapna nai h haqeeqat h ye.
He whispered .
Taani has tears in her eyes.
Rey wiped that.
His touch.
It made her to shiver.
How she missed it badly.
T:Re..yy??
she stammered.
R:Haan mein..
kyun aana nai chaiye tha?
He winked at her.
Meanwhile the light came.
She rolled her eyes n found everyone is smiling at her.
Swayam who is standing near dadi winked at her.
Rey snapped his finger.
R:Kya huwa??
ab bhi yakeen nai huwa?
Taani Stared him.
Numerous thought runs in her mind.
Meanwhile Rey took a diamond ring from his pocket.
He took her left hand.
He slided that on her hand.
Everyone clapped at them.
Taani stared him all suprised.
R:U called me in ur song n im here.
Will u b Mine Forever?
Taani is speechless.
She hugged him tightly ..
Rey smiled at her n hugged her back.
Everyone is standing their wth aww expression.
Taani pulled back From hug.
R:Im waiting for u from the day wen u leave me.
I hope u say yes to me.
Batao na Taani
Taani has laughing tears.
T:haan...
I will b urs forever...
she smiled widely n hugged him.
Rey hugged her back.
Then the Floor is filled wth Round of Applause with a Love birds Reunion.


The End



Hope u guys lkd it.
Ignore mistakes .
Do lke n cmnt.





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..khUshbOo.. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
nice..lovely n awhesm Os
beautifully writn
loved it 😊
TR_MN_KR thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Beautiful OS
Loved the song selection
Thanx for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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phle to bhttt bada thankkkuuu yrrr tumne mri req accpt ki or fir itna awesome os i love this os yr taani ka dance
swayam ka suprise
or rey ka prapose krna
i love it
muuuaaahhh
ROJA-TAAREY thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such cutie cutie os..
Loved it..
The way taani was missing rey..
Its soo nice..
Nd i love the wau rey proposed her..
Such a cute update didu..

newmoon18 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Beautiful os
So flawlessly penned down


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Wow that was really a sweet os, loved the way you reunited taarey, keep writing more works like this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute os
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Areesha566 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey awesome os
I don't know who taarey is but you really write well on them
Love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Awsome
Hey if possible write more Taarey work
Loved it
Keep writing :)
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