SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn SEASON 2 Thread 3 13/7/15 Ch37 Pg127 pstd - Page 7

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Thankyou all fr liking, commenting, spamming. Am busy with exams so plz bear late updates.
Enjoy the next!
Recap- Taking crae of Sammy. Swayam to find out who's the card sender.

STOP THE SONG NOW!
At an instant, he ran out to know the sender, then he saw SARA near the wall, taking her bicycle and about to ride.
Sara ceased her going when she heard him calling her name. She gazed at him as he came to her.

Swayam*shocked/amazed*- Sara? Tum? Woh card tumne...
She didn't speak any word but nodded to him.
Swayam*sweetly*- Achha...pehle tum ghar chalo.. Come with me.

She agreed and both walked in.
Swayam- Kaka, Iski cycle aap parking mein rakhwa do.
Kaka- Aur kuch beta?
Swayam- Nahi.. Bas yahi..

She got out from the cycle and they went inside.

Sharon saw them while passing by the hall and moved to them.

Sharon- Sara? Yahan?
Sara smiled and both hugged each other.
Sharon- Akele aayi?
Swayam- Sharon. She is the one who was sending us those cards/letters.

And this line made Sharon's eyes turn wide open.
Sharon- Tumhe kaise pata? N seriously??
Swayam- Haan...
He told her the scenario which took place few seconds ago.
Sharon- Sabse first, a Thankyou for these cards. Woh bohot achhe lage...
Swayam- Hmm. Humne socha bhi nahi tha yeh cards tum bhej sakti ho..
Sara- Gussa ho mujhse??
Sharon- Nahi Sar...

"Didzz Jijuu"
There Maanvi was... She smiling, entered the hall.
Maanvi- Sammy kaisi hai?? Kahan hai...

While speaking, her gaze went through Sara also.
Maanvi- Ghar nahi gayi Sara abhi tak?
Sara- Woh card...

Before Maanvi could speak a word, Sharon spoke.
Sharon- The card sender is Sara! Remember, I told you...
Maanvi*sigh*- Finally! It got revealed. Hush.

Both, Sara Maanvi hugged.
Swayam- Maanvi? Sara? Anything we are missing?
Maanvi- Jiju, Didz I am sorry.
Sharon- For what??
Maanvi- I..I was well aware of Sara sending you all this...
SwaRon- What!!!
Maanvi- I know many questions must be running in your mind, but I know aaj sab clear ho jayega.
Sharon- Were you helping her in all this?
Maanvi- Yeah...

***
Sitting on couch/sofa..

Sharon- I am so confused!! Those cards or letters out of love, okay but no name.. Then party mein kuch related baatein hui then too no one told. And aaj we come to know it's Sara and Maanvi, you helping her? And yeah... She is living with you and not Aarti di (Sara's Mom).
Maanvi- Exactly, there's a reason why this all happened.
Swayam- Say? And Sara, kya hua?
Sara- Ghar mein achha nahi lagta..
Maanvi- So she is living in my home since months.
Sara- Maa (Aarti) chillati (shouts) hai, daat (scold) deti hai roz..
Swayam- Princess, yeh cards lekin secretly kyun bheje? Naam kyun nahi likha?
Sara came to him and he held her face gently...

Sara- Kyunki mujhe aapki yaad aati hai... naam nahi likha...woh..bas..
Maanvi- Jiju, when Aarti di and Sara lived alone, once I went there but mujhe woh environment achha nahi laga, I mean Sara was upset, uska behaviour bhi alag tha. And what amazed me was ki jab meine Sara se baat ki, she asked me about your well being. Pata hai somewhere mujhe laga ki she wishes you near, but then..*sigh* Achha, later Sara humare saath rehne lagi till exam aur during that time only, woh...card...ka start hua! Bina 'name' ka card. Kuch reason tha like jisse we did aur I assured her ki agar kuch problem ya koi issue hota bhi hai to I'll support her.
Sharon- Itna kuch? Why didn't you told us before?
Maanvi- This was meant to be today.. The right time it is..
Sharon- Aarti se you had any talk?
Maanvi- Yeah. Vaise bhi least she cared or cares about Sara. *SwaRon glanced at each other* One thing I'll say.. Sara is just 5-6 but has gone through enough, views like separation and fights for her is...You both can imagine n understand.
Swayam- It's really...
Sharon- Mujhe abhi bhi sab disconnected sa lag raha hai. Reason bol yaar for no name.
Maanvi- Didz!! Agar Sara ka naam hota to aap Aarti di se baat karte. And Sara ko laga ki agar Aarti di jo at chal jayega to aur problems aa jayengi like scolding n etc. Aur sach bolun to even I had the doubt.
Swayam- Valid enough.
Sharon- Ohh fine. *to Sara* Sara? Itna darr lagta hai?
Sara- Woh jab Maa aur Uncle!
Swayam- U..n..cl..e..
Sara- Unhe mein Papa bolti thi..Maa ne kaha Uncle bolo..

Sharon looked at Maanvi, who just blinked her eyes once.
Sara- Woh fight karte..the.. Pata hai, Maa mujhe dark room mein... band kar deti thi... light bhi nahi..

Swayam went numb seeing her brimmed eyes...
Sara- Thodi der baad kholti..(later, used to open) Mujhe Uncle ne bola ki I am bad aur Maa bhi.. Fir woh gaye, ab nahi aate.. Aur na Maa sach mein bad... mere saath nahi khelti kabhi.

Sara's face hung down and tears didn't stop from the Ladies standing near. Swayam, who was near Saamia, took a breath and held her shoulders.

Swayam- You are a very good girl..
Sara- Sam, mujhe Maa se darr lagta hai..
Swayam- Aise thodi na darte (afraid) hai Sara...
Sara- Mujhe aapki aur Shari ki yaad aati hai.. ek mein cycle se gir gayi thi, pata, Maa ne scold kiya... aapke jaise pyaar nahi karti..

Sharon knelt down infront of her, wiping her tears.
Sharon- Bachhi meri, rona nahi..
Swayam- Sara..t..

Saamia's sleep broke and they heard her calling.

Swayam- Angel...
Maanvi- You stay here, I'll see.
Sharon- Plz give her milk, kitchen mein glass is kept.
Maanvi went inside.
Sharon- Sara, kya kehna hai bachha... darr to nahi lag raha?
Sara- Mam chhod ne aati thi school wali, Maa nahi..
Swayam- Tum ek...
Sara- Sam.. Maa bolti thi agar Mam ke saath nahi gayi to school nahi jaane degi..
Swayam- Okay.. Ab bas Sara. Shar! I think we should let her stop ya.. We've understood nah...
Sharon- Yeah..you're right... Wait, I bring her chocolate and snacks.

Swayam- Ek baat you'll tell, Sara?
Sara- Haan..
Swayam- Tum humari baat maanti ho na?
Sara nodded.
Swayam- To ab again, I am saying... abhi bilkul nahi rona...
Sara- Darr lagta hai...
Swayam- Koi kuch nahi karega Sara ko..

Sara immediately hugged him, he to tightly hugged her, rubbing her back.
Even Sharon came...

Sharon- Yeh lo chocolate.
Sara- Nahi..
Swayam- Sara ki favourite hai.. Eat it.
Sara took that and started eating it while Sharon wiped her(Sara's) eyes.

Sara- Mujhe aapke saath rehna hai...
Swayam- Kahin nahi jaane denge tumhe, Sara...
Sharon- Yeh Maanvi bhi kahan hai..*shout* Maanvi!!! Where are you? Come out with Saamia nah!

Saamia was held by Maanvi.
Sara- Haw? Yeh Sammy ko kaise lag gaya?
Sharon- Woh stairs se gir gayi thi...
Sara- Woh khelegi nahi?
Swayam- She will play but baith (sit) kar hi..
Sharon- And Sara ke saath breakfast, then playing.

***
Sharon was lost in thoughts since all this happened and whatever she heard..

Maanvi- Didz?
Sharon- Maanvi... you serve them the paratha and chutney.
Maanvi- Tujhe kya ho raha hai??
Sharon- Arey kuch nahi... just I think I need to calm myself...let out things!!

Swayam saw her going, he stopped her.
Swayam- Kya hua Sharon? Kahan jaa rahi ho?
Sharon*frustrated*- Swayam... thoda time plz... want to be alone!!
Swayam- Don't wanna share?
Sharon- Sorry.. I don't want to disturb you... tumhara mood... kal jaise..no... I'll be back nah!

She fiddled within her words and simple ran to a room.

Swayam- Dance hall jayegi, To dance her feelings out!!
Saamia- Mommy...Kahan gayi.
Swayam- Angel, woh thoda work karne gayi hai.. Aap breakfast khao.
Maanvi sat beside Saamia and fed her. Sara was also eating her food.
Maanvi- Jiju.. I am here only, if you wish to go, then please carry on..
Swayam- Yeah! *thoughts* Mixed emotions hai uske mind mein...She won't say but I can feel that she needs me...

***
ON THE SONG - "ZEHNASEEB" It's from 'Hasee to Phasee' movie!

In Dance hall;

Sharon- All these events!! Everything so fast... kuch sochne-samajhne ka time hi nahi mil raha...

She tied her hairs in messy bun and went to the CD player and inserted the CD!
Sharon- Huh... dance! Hmm..

She arranged the table in a corner and closed the windows, shifted curtains hiding the light coming through them..

She, with a sigh, curtained the door (still unlocked)...and moved to the centre of the hall.

The tunes were hitting her ears... and she tapped her foot on the beats...

Swayam reached the Hall, he kept looking at her by opening the windows and slightly shifting the curtains to a side.

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..
Mere Kareeb, Mere Habeeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..

She closed her eyes and one "star" reflected and that was whom she was missing... her mother!
Her hands, in air, moved as if touching her mother's face with ease, with love...and this imaging made her smile a short one before her eyes opened to face the reality...

She twirled round for once and then moved on floor, towards the table, where a photo frame with wreath was kept..

Sharon- Love you my star! If you were here, you would have seen I got your reflection here... Swayam's Mumma..

Swayam smiled and headed towards the door...

Tere Sang Beete Har Lamhe Pe Humko Naaz Hai..
Tere Sang Jo Naa Beete Uspe Aitraaz Hai..
Iss Kadar Hum Dono Ka Milna Ek Raaz Hai..

Her eyes travelled to the family picture frame kept next... A happy glint appeared on her face seeing the smiles of 5.

But again, remembrance of Sara, the kid, made her stand and her shivering fingers, her body moved in furious way..

This led her to clash with Swayam, the curtains (translucent) ceased their view yet her heart sighed as she landed safely into his arms.

Hua Ameer, Dil Gareeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..

She was turned by him, the way, her back touched his chest.. ( curtains between them)and her hands, gently were placed on his heart.. She felt the cloth shrinking with his (other) hand undoing her bun and so her eyes shut as her legs were going too weak to bear that intensity.

As his whisper "Sharon.." hit her ears, her toes twisted inwards... he, instantly, made her turn with a swirl that now both were inside, rounded by the curtain...

Sharon let her eyes open yet didn't face him..
"Look at me..."
His words didn't affect her, She took her hand out of his grip..
"Tum jaao naa..." Saying this, she tried running out from there...
Swayam grew closer to her, holding her waist roughly...
"I know, You need me!!"
Those faded words of him and his touch removing her hairs from face, made her tremble a bit..

Somehow she left that curtain covering before breaking down fully; he followed her till the steps she walked hurriedly...
Coming infront, he placed his right hand on her cheek..

Lena Dena Nahi Duniya Se Mera,
Bas Tujhse Kaam Hai..
Teri Ankhiyon Ke Sheher Mein
Yaara Sab Intezaam Hai..

Her shoo off reaction left him stunned.
She walked few steps ahead and collapsed on the floor kneeling and bending backwards till the floor touch... He leaned towards her face, gripping her hairs/head too; her vision blurred due to tears, they flowed down when their eyes gazed at each other's...

Khushiyon Ka Ek Tukda Mile Ya Mile Gham Ki Khurchane..
Yaara Tere Mere Kharche Mein Dono Ka Hi Ek Daam Hai..

Getting up, she turned her face to opposite but he rooted her at her place by holding her shoulders...and her cheeks continued to get wet...
Her lips wore a genuine smile as he tilted her head, softly brushing his lips on each of her cheek, kissed those flowing tear drops...

Hona Likha Tha Yunhi Jo Hua..
Ya Hote Hote Kahin Anjaane Mein Ho Gaya..

Hugging her from behind, he took her hands in his and opened them... she gave a glance at him but his indication made her again look at her palms... He slowly caressed the lines, destiny line of her hands with his thumb and squeezed them lightly...

Jo Bhi Hua, Hua Ajeeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..

Swallowing a shallow breath within tears as he nuzzled into her neck, she entwined her fingers tightly into his.
Her eyelids parted, she looked at the mirror in the front and even he gazed at her through it..
It was irresistible for her, she turned to him.. His tears poured out and she fixed her eyes too... With all affection their orbs conveyed love, smile, care... and sentiments devoured within them..

Hua Ameer, Dil Gareeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb..
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha,
Tujhe Chaahun Betahaasha Zehnaseeb..

She clutched their hands over her chest as tight as possible and with ease, flattened his palms there..
"Swayamm...Sorry nah.."
"Shh...wh..."

She kept her finger on his lips and didn't let him speak but clutching his shirt, she mouthed...
"I Love You Swayamm!!"


He planted a kiss on her hands and she went in his arms; he adhered her close saying "Love you too Shar".

***
Swayam- Come..let's sit there...
***

Edited by sakshibshah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
So? Card sender revealed!!! πŸ˜‰
Whom you expected???😳

Okay I hope you liked it. Everything has a reason behind why it's done, so that was the update.πŸ˜‰
Song sequence? Liked?

Plz plz HIT LIKE COMMENT !

Wil wait fr ur reviews...

PS- Exams on so plz bear if I update late.

Demand- 40+ likes, 4pages comments n spam till 45page.

Love,
Sakshi.
Edited by -SwaRonWorksPm- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pehle ka I already know so i won't comment on that.
But the dance. Oh my god it was absolutely magical.
You really wrote the dance wala part well.

Loved it 😊
Thanks for the PM. I'll spam soon. πŸ˜†
Edited by -spongy- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Poor sara.
Feeling bad for her

Swaron dance is good

Nice chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
congrats for ur new thread.
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amazing partπŸ‘
loveddd ttt😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
It was nice...
Feeling sad of Sara...
Nicely written...loved swaron and Sara part
Swaron dance was beautiful...
Waiting to read more... :)
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Awesome update...
Loved it...
Felt bad for sammy...:((
The song selection was gud...:))
I liked the last part...
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Thank god card sender is revealed nice update i like the song thanks for the pm
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finally updated!!
worth waiting
this updated was just amazinggg.. πŸ‘
sara sender
loved it..!!!!
the end swaron part well written πŸ‘

thnxx for the pm
update soon
All the best for ur exams
Edited by taaD3yam - 9 years ago
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