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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

this one is superb nishi

i loved the way you ve penned down sharons emotions

they are divorced

swayam is a writer

the love is still there in their hearts

sharon silently watching swayam speak

is a proof forit

nice one

truly emotional

keep up the good work

thanks 4 d pm

keep writing

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

wow it was amazing
brilliantly written
loved it

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

wow awesome os

loved it to the core

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Wow!
Beautiful OS :)
SwaRon divorced but they still love each other so much :') :'(
Loved how you showed Sharon's point of view throughout
You're one amazing writer! 👏
Keep writing like this :)

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

It looked more profound Nishi.

Eclipsed...amazing portrayal. 👏👏

Intense and beautiful.

It was a treat to read.

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