SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 43

Nishtha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Nice update...
finally things r gtng btr btwn dem...
aww Sharon remembrd evrythng abt swayam wo b itni detail mei...
awww she said dat it was him...
hehehe swayam's mom ws smart den him...
update asap
thnx fr pm

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Omg.. .such a soothing chapter.. ..felt soo good after reading it...i loved the way sharon replied to swayam..the whole scene.. ,i felt i ws watching a show.. One thing dat striked me today ws taani supporting swayan..as she leaned to his shoulder for comforting him...wow ..nicely written guys...
While d3ws airing,i used to get excited for watching it,we all do...but the same excitement ,i m feeling for this ff...i really love it...
Thank you ...i love you

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Shradha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

One thing for sure...

Its ok u dint include ur finest poems but,

But more thn tht Sharon's way of almost confession was

FANTABULOUSLYFANTASTIC...😊👏

thts the word came in my mind...

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Aashlesha deshpande

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

no words to explain what to say hey you are too good ,what to say nothing but i do not want to send u PM because sending pm it is just a mere formality,u r too good no words to say i am speechless

Edited by rechal001 - 9 years ago

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

OMG it was stunning update...👏

im shocked... very well written...all emotions were awesomely written...

the last part was no word to say...

u both are amazing and ur writing brilliant...keep this great work ohk...

and i want more stories...so think about new one ohk Ani?😉

do continue soon...

sorry for the late and small cmt...little busy😳

Keechu di :)

Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago

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VReSh

@VReSH

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

and even i have this huge smile on my face right now... Grinning like Crazy...my mom is here n she is staring at me like i m reading some love letter and smiling and blushing!!!!😃

as always this is Too good... i cant wait for the next one...obviously its goona be an Awesome one...Please make it long 😉 i jus cant have enough of it :)

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Trisha paul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Beautiful Updated!!

Loved this chapter so so much .. ❤️❤️

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VrushanianAdity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#428

The update was so hell cute..

Sharon.. aww.. Seriously, so sweet yaar..

Cuteness overloaded.. and, it was beautiful as well; The best thing, I would say..👏

Swayam's mom part, cracked me up.. Parents are always smart..😃 😉

Please do update soon and, thank you so much for the pm.. 😊

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Aneesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#429

Oh man, freaking lovely update😛

Taani's excuse for increased volume was🤣🤣. This sister can't get any more cuter.

Loved the whole thing Sharon said on the show. Truly from her heart, regretting everything she has done. The way she explained Taani's b'day party & what she said about Swayam were too sweet. Embarrassed Swayam... awww😳. Finally she admitted it was Swayam...Happy dance.

Their mom is the best mom in the world. Love her teasing Swayam.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon.

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anum_6

@anum_6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#430

Wow what a update
Love it
Awesome update
Woow SwaRon love u
Update soon can't wait
Thnx for pm

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