SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 41

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

awsm update... i wndr ab sharon kya karegi... she sud give swayam a chance... plz update soon... 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: renu_vrushan

U r amazing writer
I love ur all ff.
now coming to the update
it was so well written
I love swayam taani convo, swayam confronting sharon and swayam's letter.
each nd every part was so well portrayed...
thanks for pm nd
update next chapter soon bcz yeh dil mange more πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tinku82

πŸ‘Its wonderful

Awesome update
😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ndcdance

amazing update...

I know ive not unres my before comment..sorry for that..but yea I read from where id stopped..but sorry for that..
and dis was really well written...
tks for the pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Today again im late to comment 😭

As always i loved it... super...i want to read this more and more like i dont want to stop this...
you both are doing an amazing job. wonderful writing..πŸ‘
each part is unpredictable...πŸ˜ƒ
and the start was awesome...loved tanni and swayam.. they both r so cute brother and sister..
i loved it when swayam confronted tanni. and even tanni did share everything to swayam...thts nice...πŸ˜ƒ
and they both were adorable. πŸ˜›
and the way swayam entered the class and asked for sharon was nice.πŸ˜†
and then came the waited part... finally swayam did the right thing...that was a beautiful part. and what i liked the most is the way he asked everything, he just came to the point directly without wasting much time...that was commendable... πŸ‘
and finally tanni told him abt sharon's insecurity πŸ˜› ..
and the letter omg was superb... so lovly lines...touching one...it really felt as swayam writing.. loved it...
btw i missed poem today
so update soon...im waiting to read more of this...
FAST UPDATE


Keechu :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..

oh my goddd


this was wonderful every bit of it

swayams outburst taanis confession was really shocking and sweet

swayasm being all restless to meet and say sharon was making me all the more excited

but the way swayam dragged sharon from school was very funny but the confrontation was wow

but sharons struggle to keep him at bay was painful

but you know iam glad taani put up the pov ofsharon in front of swayam dat was very much needed

and the letter was touching in true sense it had all the feeling and emotions swayam wanted to portray

u know in the whole letter i liked 2 words a lot 'yours swayam' gave me goosebumps literally

i always say u both i love sharon in this ff but today u made me fall for swayam

disappointed there wasnt ma fav part today i was anticipating to read one

now update soon wanna know wats sharons decision

love *_*

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanlove

Omg...i loved each and every word of this update..you both rocks...i kno its a pretty long update...but my heart more..i wished it ws a loong one...no words...again you left me speechless. ..i love you both...


thanks a lot!!!..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Finally swayam joined all the dots

Swayam nd tani convo was apt
Love itit

Nd then
Swaron confrontation
Omg
That was awesome

Thanks 4 d pm dear


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: koms_vrushan

ani u r great such an awesome chapter this is. ot became my favourite among 10 chapters.
i really loved all the lines. swayam taani discussion then swaron in abondone corridor and finally dat letter. he so nicely pinned his feelings which ll clear all confusion for sharon
thanks for pm
once again waiting for next chapter.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anum_6

amazing its amzing

update
love it
ttayum is so good their conv
reyum are nys \
swaron are the best
she is insecure
but sawyum relised her man jye gai
wonderful update


Love
Anum


thanks a lot!!!..:)
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