thanks a lot dearOriginally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
awsm update... i wndr ab sharon kya karegi... she sud give swayam a chance... plz update soon... π
thanks a lot dearOriginally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
awsm update... i wndr ab sharon kya karegi... she sud give swayam a chance... plz update soon... π
thank u dearOriginally posted by: renu_vrushan
U r amazing writer
I love ur all ff.
now coming to the update
it was so well written
I love swayam taani convo, swayam confronting sharon and swayam's letter.
each nd every part was so well portrayed...
thanks for pm nd
update next chapter soon bcz yeh dil mange more π
thank u dear
thank u dearOriginally posted by: ndcdance
amazing update...
I know ive not unres my before comment..sorry for that..but yea I read from where id stopped..but sorry for that..and dis was really well written...tks for the pm
thanks a lotOriginally posted by: --Keechu--
Today again im late to comment π
As always i loved it... super...i want to read this more and more like i dont want to stop this...you both are doing an amazing job. wonderful writing..πeach part is unpredictable...πand the start was awesome...loved tanni and swayam.. they both r so cute brother and sister..i loved it when swayam confronted tanni. and even tanni did share everything to swayam...thts nice...πand they both were adorable. πand the way swayam entered the class and asked for sharon was nice.πand then came the waited part... finally swayam did the right thing...that was a beautiful part. and what i liked the most is the way he asked everything, he just came to the point directly without wasting much time...that was commendable... πand finally tanni told him abt sharon's insecurity π ..and the letter omg was superb... so lovly lines...touching one...it really felt as swayam writing.. loved it...btw i missed poem todayso update soon...im waiting to read more of this...FAST UPDATEKeechu :)
thank u dearOriginally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..
oh my goddd
this was wonderful every bit of itswayams outburst taanis confession was really shocking and sweetswayasm being all restless to meet and say sharon was making me all the more excitedbut the way swayam dragged sharon from school was very funny but the confrontation was wowbut sharons struggle to keep him at bay was painfulbut you know iam glad taani put up the pov ofsharon in front of swayam dat was very much neededand the letter was touching in true sense it had all the feeling and emotions swayam wanted to portrayu know in the whole letter i liked 2 words a lot 'yours swayam' gave me goosebumps literallyi always say u both i love sharon in this ff but today u made me fall for swayamdisappointed there wasnt ma fav part today i was anticipating to read onenow update soon wanna know wats sharons decisionlove *_*
Originally posted by: vrushanlove
Omg...i loved each and every word of this update..you both rocks...i kno its a pretty long update...but my heart more..i wished it ws a loong one...no words...again you left me speechless. ..i love you both...
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Finally swayam joined all the dots
Swayam nd tani convo was apt
Love itit
Nd then
Swaron confrontation
Omg
That was awesome
Thanks 4 d pm dear
Originally posted by: koms_vrushan
ani u r great such an awesome chapter this is. ot became my favourite among 10 chapters.
i really loved all the lines. swayam taani discussion then swaron in abondone corridor and finally dat letter. he so nicely pinned his feelings which ll clear all confusion for sharon
thanks for pm
once again waiting for next chapter.
amazing its amzing
updatelove itttayum is so good their convreyum are nys \swaron are the bestshe is insecurebut sawyum relised her man jye gaiwonderful updateLoveAnum
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