Today again im late to comment πAs always i loved it... super...i want to read this more and more like i dont want to stop this...
you both are doing an amazing job. wonderful writing..π
each part is unpredictable...π
and the start was awesome...loved tanni and swayam.. they both r so cute brother and sister..
i loved it when swayam confronted tanni. and even tanni did share everything to swayam...thts nice...π
and they both were adorable. π
and the way swayam entered the class and asked for sharon was nice.π
and then came the waited part... finally swayam did the right thing...that was a beautiful part. and what i liked the most is the way he asked everything, he just came to the point directly without wasting much time...that was commendable... π
and finally tanni told him abt sharon's insecurity π ..
and the letter omg was superb... so lovly lines...touching one...it really felt as swayam writing.. loved it...
btw i missed poem today
so update soon...im waiting to read more of this...
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Keechu :)
Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago
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