SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 37

Originally posted by: tinku82

Sharon's concern him being following her...

Nicely penned gr8 work

Keep updating...😊👏

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Originally posted by: rechal001

ye part to main samaj nahi payi but i am sure that i will be get mesmerized by u r next part

Originally posted by: aneesha93

As usual lovely update. Sharon's concern for Swayam made me go aww. "T-shirt utaro" was🤣. The demanding Sharon. The hospital scene showed her concern, care, pain and love towards Swayam. It was funny too. I equally loved Swayam's concern for Sharon. How he doesn't wanna make her feel uncomfortable and wants her happy always. Even though it hurts him, its so sweet of him to do it all for her.

So finally, Mr. I- know- it- all has begun to put the pieces together. I can't wait any longer to see what is gonna happen next. Confronting, denial mode, ignorance, normal mode, fight??? Whatever it is, I can't wait.

Thanks for the pm. Update sooner

Originally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..

Unresrved ^_^

this chapter had soo much in it dono where do i start

as i always say i like sharons character in the ff i liked the way swayams behavior dint effect her

and that projector room part was a bliss

her concern her love i was just drowned in her

but shirt utharo wala part😆😆 any boy would be in shock

socho humhara swayam itna sharmatha hai tho use kaise laga hoga 😆😆

this scene really made me smile😃

sharon knowing swayam inside out was a bliss too the way she was in full charge made me go awww for her you know na i just love her more

i dono how long swayam can control his emotions and keep back his love

you know at the end i felt how difficult it must be for sharon to accept that swayams love is illusion and not true and she just longs for him

but as i say she is one strong woman👏

the best part you know which is it i got a sinking feeling after reading those beautiful words there was soo much pain in it

and again the queens of cliffhangers i soo hate you both

but iam glad now swayam know who sharon is madly in love with

i dare you dont make me to wait coz i just hate to😕

P.S oh god such a big comment never mind

love *_*

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Ohh😕 u left us on cliff hanger...but sometimes its good haha

So bck to update... Awsumm as Alwys

Too good...Very nicely written

Swayam hand got hurt n then sharon's concern awww soo sweet

Lovely part

Thank uh for pm.

Plz update soon

Originally posted by: lavanyalaa0

Thanks for pm..
was really waiting for an update...
sharon expressing her care towards swayam was super awesome..😃
bt..at,..the..end...😔
i'll like to tell you this ff has turned into one of my favourite.ffs...till..date.👏

so UPDATE SOON !!!.😊

Originally posted by: prajana

Another awsome update!!

Sharon's caring side was too gud

Even docter was laughing

Again a cliffhanger!!

Dont know what swayam will do now

Update soon😊

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Awsum awsum awsum...
ur update nevr fail to surprise me...
sharon z so concernd fr him...
Dat she didnt evn realise wt z she sayng..
Finally mr-i-knw-it-all strts knwng all(i knw it dsnt mk any sense)
Bt kya karu i dnt knw wt to write...
plzz update asap
Thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: ujwalv

U knw wat ekdam perfect mod pe ayi hai story

M very very excited abt it..

Ok so frm start

First I thought kuch medical room scene jaisa hoga bt no nd dats okk

I loved this scene also..best part was shirt utaro😆

I loved hospital scene..sharon's concern fr swayam..👍🏼

Highlight of the update - " MR I-KNOW-IT-ALL"

Nw swayam knws Sharon loves him

I guess swayam is bar confront nahi karega..lets see wat u hav planned

As I said perfect mod pe hai..m loving it

Update soon

Originally posted by: ujwalv

nd ya frgt to mention abt the poem

hamesha ki tarah👍🏼👏.loved it..

"For your own good I'm forced to keep you apart..

As you will walk through the fog trying to see...

You will have to quit your bad habit , ME..."