Sharon's care, anger & LOVE at a tym
FINALLY MR I-KNOW-IT-ALL has started analysing her words
poem was as amazing lyk always
Ani jaldi upd karna wnt to knw hw he vl react
U knw wat ekdam perfect mod pe ayi hai story
M very very excited abt it..
Ok so frm start
First I thought kuch medical room scene jaisa hoga bt no nd dats okk
I loved this scene also..best part was shirt utaroπ
I loved hospital scene..sharon's concern fr swayam..ππΌ
Highlight of the update - " MR I-KNOW-IT-ALL"
Nw swayam knws Sharon loves him
I guess swayam is bar confront nahi karega..lets see wat u hav planned
As I said perfect mod pe hai..m loving it
Update soon
"For your own good I'm forced to keep you apart..
As you will walk through the fog trying to see...
You will have to quit your bad habit , ME..."
thanks a tonOriginally posted by: taareyswarond3
Res..
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Unres π
This update was awesome π
Sharon's concern for him π³
The hospital scene was fab βοΈ
Loved the update π
And tum dono ki writing toh awesome hai hi π³
Thanks for pm π
And finaaalllyyy I'm on track with everyone else π π
Update soon π
-anagha π
thank uSharon's concern him being following her...
Nicely penned gr8 workKeep updating...ππ
awww..dont hate usOriginally posted by: sanchiswaron
So here it is :o
MR-I-Know-It-All :o so now its all clear for himGosh!!Why your ends are such ki I have to start commenting about end :| leaving restOk well I was waiting for some thing to happen so they could talk and he got injured :o :( and Sharon ka haq was totally different side of her *-* (which I hope Swayam would discover more sides soon)He actually don't listen to her :'( only if he could have pata chalta she do talk about him though how much ever she deny :(Waiting to read further ^_^Thanks and Update soomPS- I hate you for using the word stupid for poem -_-
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