SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 33

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

No rush take it slow ^_^

Not what I expected but its surely better than that :p

Din think he would talk to her after knowing rather confront her :o but as he did her reaction was predictable since she still thinks he fell for just her thoughts and voice and not her :(

She need to wait to know hoe confused he was between Sharon and RJ and certainly liked both :')

Both are right on their part

Beautifully written :')

Take it more slowww :3 and write long conversations :'(

Loved it thanks a lot :*

Yet again the poem and her feelings _/\_ couldn't compliment better

Update soon ^_^

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Goosshhh* wiping my tears* 😭 😭 😭

Im not ling but this update really made me to cry

Im speechless😭

now i got to know the twist ... hmm so she is not accepting that she loves him.😡

i feel really bad swayam... dont know my heart was aching when he was talking to tanni as well as to sharon too

I really hope everything will fine soon...

but how? 😲 only u both knows😆

I loved the brother and sister relations ..

tanni's relation with swayam is really nice...i think its better with swayam..he really opened to her...i love that...

now i want to see wht will happen next...

really cant wait...

i know this time my comment not crazzy one bcoz not in a mood to comment like that , the reason is this update only...

wonderful works...beautifully written...

so update fast... now i know how to make u to update...😆

Keechu Di😳

Originally posted by: tinku82

Liked it but somewhr

I think he was too quick to react and confront

but his confusion and her's Q are right

on their own place...

nice update...😊

Originally posted by: i_yatharthk

the best decision to take it slow...as u said it will definitely give their characters more detail and depth...

very well written...the emotions of swayam and sharon well portrayed

taayam and taaron talks too were very good...

and last but not the least the poem in the end...taarif karne ke liye shabd hi nahi rehte kabhi...the last two lines depicting sharon's dilemma or KASHMAKASH as u said just perfectly...waiting for the next update i won't say hoping this or that in it coz i know u will turn the best possible way u can to the story...

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: aneesha93

Lovely yet emotional update. Their reactions and emotions were very well penned👏. No no, please don't rush. Would love to see their detailed reaction and inner turmoil.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

This update, I would like to say was emotionally beautiful..

I love Swayam's character.. His innocence is the best part. The way he was behaving childish, was really beautifully penned. And even Sharon's reaction made sense.. Good that the story is taking it's own sweet time to grow..

And TaaYam and Taani-Sharon bond was also superb..

And the poem, as always, khubshoorat..

Do update soon and thanks for da PM.,

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

dis is very well penned... loved d chap... hope jaldi maan jaye sharon... & thoda romance mile... 😛

p.s- i nvr told ke ur poems r awsm... beautifully penned... keep writing ... god bless... 😊 update fast 😃

Originally posted by: trisha19

Awesome update!! 👏

Originally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..

good chapter glad that you dint take it the way i expected the story to move

i liked the small convo bw swayam and taani you dint rush there to bring swayam and sharon meet

somewhere i feel it was required and HOPE swayam had that it was him that was nice i liked it

swayams asks sharon the truth and she refuses to give in i feel she is stubborn but her character is strong so i expected this

swayam being a little childish there i expect a convo bw rey and swayam in future i think its needed for swayams character to enhance

and the poem it was very well written

each and everything u wrote in the chapter was sum up in few lines

i feel that this was one of the best poems in the ff so faar

and the last 2 lines of it pulled it off soo well soo proud of you who have written it way to go gal

i expect much more from this ff so lets c how it goes

^_^

love

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved it..nd ya take it slow m loving it this way.

Felt bad for both of them😭

Especially swayam- "isiliye... isiliye mujhe koi chance nahi dena tha... Isi baat ka daar tha that if I allow myself to feel for someone wo nahi samjhegi... Mai samjha nahi paunga... Kal tune bhi bola aaj usne bhi same baat boli... mai utna important thodi na hoon... Par usi ne majboor kiya... ek chance den eke liye... Aur diya to ye hua... so basically I was right and she was wrong..." 💔

Poem was beautiful..super awesome as always. just loved it especially last lines

"Zehen mein jaga ek kashmakash hai

Kya use mujhse mohabbat hai

Ya fir usne kiya sirf mere awaz se pyaar

Aur mujhe mana sirf apna yaar..."👏

update soon..