first of all am sorry i cudnt comment on all updates individually
chap 3
nice update
swayams attempt to console the guy
but to his awe the plan of reverse psychology did not work
sharon explaining to the guy that
he should look at the positive side of
the matter rather than committing suicide
swayam surprised at her way of getting things done
swaron convo was good
chap 4
swayam taking sharon along with him
to his secret place -the orphanage
the stall;swayams friend- the small girl angel
swayam opening up to sharon bit by bit
their journey back home
thanks to the wiper that wasnt working
sharon saving the small puppy amidst the rain
swayam saving her from the accident
he felt something 4 sharon
both of them getting to know each other
chap 5
swaron taani and rey in rehearsal hall
they playing truth or dare
swayam fumbling at the truth to be answered
indeed swayam has changed
swayam confession that he lovs a girl
hurting sharon an she moving out
even swayams mom feels that he has changed
chap6
swarons convo
swayam urging her to sit with him
sharon telling him that she doesnt mean
anything to the person she luvs
and swayams concern for her
taani and sharon convo
and sharon assuring that shes all fyn
swayam had started getting a
connection bw rj and sharon
swayam thinking abt sharon as he listend to the rj
chap7
swayams mom pulling his leg
swayam swaitching on the radio early morning
swayam certaainly has some feelings for sharon
rey asking him to name the girl and he lukd at sharon
poor sharon she wasnt sure if she shud be happy or sad
taani nd sharon convo was indeed needed
sharons condition and poem
swayam heard it
and you gys stoppd ri8 there
chap 8
swayam understood that it was sharon
swayam wanted to know if it was he who sharon lovd
he openening sharons bag to find the file in her bag
asking her to explain why she didnt tell him
swayams confession
sharons denial
swayam thinks that she lovs some one else
shit swayam shud have listened to the radio show
sharon hearing swayam through the phn
this story is getting interesting
i cant wait to read further
i hope i ve compensated for not commenting for so long
the poems you guys write are really awesome
i particularly love the rj part
in each update
update nxt part soon and do pm me
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