SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 29

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

BIG SURPRISE :|

Untill i read half i thought Swayam's revelation of RJ was the only surprise but actual was yet to come _/\_

You actually two surprises in one update

I loved how through her poem he got to know its Sharon only he love and like. No more two girls it was always one

I'm glad you added two week time gap between revelation of two big events

Now the next has to be Swayam confronting Sharon :|

Will he be upset? Guess so. I want him to be. Rest you know better *-*

Well while taani asked Sharon I ask you Likh kaise leti hai? Seriously your poems _/\_

Open a blog and publish them all.

You should get copyright on them.

Thanks for this surprise and update. Worth wait.

Love you :*

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

Oh yeah!! Before anything please update soon.. Please.. Can't wait to read more..

Now coming to the update, awesome..

I love Sharon and Taani bond in this FF.. Swayam is confused, he loves Sharon or the Rj and so is Sharon.. Loved it.. I love the characters of this fanfic.. Superb..

And the poem, excellent., loved it..

And Jhon Green,, this guy is awesome.,

Thanks for da pm and once again plz update soon..

Originally posted by: prajana

After reading the update there is just one thing that i can say..Oh my god!!

First swayam said in front of sharon that he likes the rj

And then swayam finally gets to know that sharon is the rj

nd not to forget the lines you wrote were beautiful..as always

Now i am dying to know what happens next

So plz update sooon😊

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Surprise Surprise Surprise...
dats d nly wrd m hvng in my mind while rdng it...
Firstly swayam reveal abt rj dat too infrnt of sharon...
Lyk rey evn i ws flng dat he wnts to knw sharon's reactn...
Nd den swayam cm to knw dat rj z non othr den sharon...
Dat too bcz of these wonderful lines...
Hats-off yr i luv these lines...:)
M hell xctd to read nxt update
Plz update asap
Thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: SHA_85

wow

wht a upd yr amazing

1st swayam's mom

dn canteen swayam disclose his feelings for RJ

dn Sharon's explanation to taani abt his feeling fir RJ nt for her

n BIG SURPRISE SHARON IS RJ

n taani's got to knw swayam knw sharon is RJ

n obvious urs poem amazing

love u both ani n nabnita

thanx a lot for a big surprise

Originally posted by: tinku82

Aftr reading ths update cant wait for next one...

it was really nice as of Swayam he was thnkng of 2 girls

But to his surprise its one and only Sharon...

Pls update soon mite cant wait...😊👏

Originally posted by: nidhi.nidsnicks

AT LAST IT GOT REVEALED...!!!

yipee...!!!!

vry vry happy..!!

thank u for this suprise update...!!!

loved it..!!

swayam ki mom...😆

nd the poem was amazing...!!!!

obvio..!!!

thanks for this lovely update..!!!!!

thank u so much..!!

Originally posted by: Ires011

Aaahhh... Jus Cant wait For the Next Update... This Was Such a Shocker re... I so so sooo Love It... Please Update Fast...

n ya till now i havent Commented about ur Poems as i never knew what to say but this peom, i jus culdnt help it... i might make no sense at all but i jus wanna say ki u are an Amazing Writer... I know yeh tho saab bolte hai, Saach hai na tho saab bolenge he... There is something so Different, so innovative about ur writings ki i jus Have this Smile on my face whenever i read ur works even if they are Emotional at times... All the Peoms have been so Brilliant, Par Excellence ki they somehow Inspire me... Jus Hoping to read many more Brilliant Works of urs... I Truly Hope n Pray ki u Reach Great Heights n i m Sure u Truly will :)

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

OMG This is we call as an update 😃

Amazing one... loved it...

gosshhh im getting craazyy over this story... 😆

Loving the way u planing it ... awesome...

Swayam finally found out😲 wht will happen now????😲

Btw swayam getting effected by both girls at the same time 🤣

Loved every bit of it..and the way swayam got to know was really cool... through the poem. that was great 👍🏼

And loved sharon's strong character here , her thought and opinions are really nice...

i loved the way she made tanni to understand wht she thinks ... and the lines were beautiful..

"

"swayam jisse pyaar karta hai wo mai nahi hoon... Rata ke 11 se 1 baje tak I am not Sharon taani...wo mera kaam hai taani... n swayam ko mujhse nahi mere awaz se pyaar hai... use kisi insaan se nahi ek ehsaas se pyaar hai...jo mai nahi hoon..."

"

Now really cant wait wht will swayam do and how will he react...

really getting excited..

so update fast...

love u

thanks for the pm 😳

~Keechu