OMG This is we call as an update πAmazing one... loved it...
gosshhh im getting craazyy over this story... π
Loving the way u planing it ... awesome...
Swayam finally found outπ² wht will happen now????π²
Btw swayam getting effected by both girls at the same time π€£
Loved every bit of it..and the way swayam got to know was really cool... through the poem. that was great ππΌ
And loved sharon's strong character here , her thought and opinions are really nice...
i loved the way she made tanni to understand wht she thinks ... and the lines were beautiful..
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"swayam jisse pyaar karta hai wo mai nahi hoon... Rata ke 11 se 1 baje tak I am not Sharon taani...wo mera kaam hai taani... n swayam ko mujhse nahi mere awaz se pyaar hai... use kisi insaan se nahi ek ehsaas se pyaar hai...jo mai nahi hoon..."
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Now really cant wait wht will swayam do and how will he react...
really getting excited..
so update fast...
love u
thanks for the pm π³
~Keechu
Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago
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