SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 9

loved taani n sharon's bond

Loved der talk, taani teasing Sharon, taani's concern, n most imp gt to knw sharon's feelings.

So she loves him bt koi expectations nahi hai..hmm

Reahersal hall part was cute she silently listening to him

N the best part of every update is radio show "FROM A LOSER TO A WINNER"

i just love reading it like swayam loves listening to it😛😉

Till nw u hav nt mentioned dat rj kaun hai bt I strongly feel ke wo Sharon hai. Der is a connection between Sharon n rj's wrds. Diary part is always like a summary to whatever happens in sharon's life.

so reveal dat soon n fr dat update fast😛

Originally posted by: main_tu_hamesha

"Aaj hui gupchup si mulakat

Kismat ne jora kuch palon ka saath

Labon ne chaha bohot kuch bolna

Lekin dil ko nehi tha apne darwaze kholna

Dilko hai darr tutne ka..

Dharkano ko hai darr rukne ka..

Aankon ne ki koshish bolne ki

Lekin unhe aadat nehi thi sunne ki

Bus yuhi thi hamari mulakat

Bebas,bematlab se halaat

Sannate ne kuch kaha nehi,

Andhere ne kuch dekha nehi

Labon ki baat ankhon mei reh gayi

Yeh mulakaat panno mei hi simat gayi..."

This is amazing Nabanita 👏

I heard u r an amazing poet from Ani😳

And ur lines are so beautiful...

Keep writing...😳

Acs nd ags
Cool

Hamesha se thi..is the best line for me in this update...

Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

So Sharon already know him well and like him :o

Thats something intresting in story :o and even taani know about it

And on other side Swayam soon is gonna fall for his favorite RJ :p

How silent she was while he kept telling things ^_^ that sounded so cute

How she slightly being teased by his name ^_^

Can you do us a favor :p please write whole story and post since we can't wait :p

Thanks ^_^

Originally posted by: vrushanlove

First i shud thank you both for this pm...i ws missing swaron very badly today...nd i ws expecting smething to cheer me up..nd den came dis update.so once again thankyou..

I m loving the progress in swaron story...bothin collage nd tro the radio...waiting for the nxt part

Originally posted by: 3sisters

Awesome just awesome thanks for pm

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

First of all before commenting on the story, let me ask u both some thing, the diary entries which concludes the part every time, are they written by you both yourself? If yes then one word, I would use here... Hats Off.. Those words are so beautiful and summarizes the whole part in few beautiful lines.. Awesome job.. Now coming to the story, the part was really good, as Sharon and Swayam kinda met each other officially now and will be working together... Yess!! :) thank u for da pm and plz plz plz update the other FF (Beyond Commitment) as well..

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Awsum amazing upd

sharon lyk swayam 👏 n taani ko pata h n above all dt taani dnt wnt to sharon gt hurt by hvng feelings fr swayam so swt of her 😊

Mr.shekhawat is falling for favt. RJ 😃

Sharon hvng feelings for swayam unpredictable 😳
bt predictable is boring 😊

sharon ko iss character me imagine karna is so impossible ,so luving dis side of her

Originally posted by: prajana

Omg..its so beautiful

I loved how sharon loves him but has no expectations..i love how mature you depict her

and your poems in the end are icing on the cake👏

continue soon😊

Originally posted by: i_yatharthk

I always wished that if sharon wud be the acs and swayam cs aftr she came back frm delhi but it cudnt be possible in the show but now u evnfulfilled my that wish...thanks
Thebest part of ur updates in this story are the extracts from sharon's diary at the end of it...they r like so KHOOBSURAT...seriously they r awesome...its lyk reading the summary of tye chapter once again nd reliving it...do continue it till the end in some or the other way...also one thing i know u dont write epilogues to ur stories but do write for this one and as poem as u r awesome in doing so..i am all this now becoz i wont be able to write appreciations to ur frther updates as my xams are about to start... Thanks for the pm...lastly...thanks for giving it on swaron aniversary ;-)
Happy 4th swaron anniversary