SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 61

prajana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#601

Such a cute update

Poor swayam..he is really being very patient😛

But i dont want sharon to confess so early

I am loving their simple cute moments

update soon😊

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SalmanShahidSm

@SalmanShahidSm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#602

res
unres

awesome chappy
swayam kitna alsi hai
sharon maid 😆

taayam fight
i lov them
agar ek word aur kaha toh ussi dustbin mein chod aunga jaha se mom dad tujhe utha ke laye🤣

Loved swaron scene during the movie

Swayam ne chup kara diya rey ko
aww swayam kitna acha bhai hai

swaron ek dusre ko kitna ache se jaante hai
sharon kitna pareshan karege swayam ko
Bichara swayam

well written
thnxx for the pm

Jyoti :)

Edited by SalmanShahidSm - 9 years ago

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 9 years ago

#603

RES

unres

cute update😊

swaron r soo cute

"waise bhai apko nahi lagta aap aj kal kuch zyada hi talent show case kar rahe ho???" taani smirked at him.. swayam knew she was talking about his poem which Sharon had read out on radio last night... he immediately looked at his mom who was trying hard not to smile and embarrass anyone... Sharon was also trying hard not to laugh out...😆😆😆

the movie moment was really cute

itna romantic scene chal raha hai n rey ne comedy ghusa di😆

"kaunsi movie dekhun???"🤣

ending part was also really cute..meine kuch jyada hi cute nahi likh diya😆

want to read more

update soon

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--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#604

Loved the update

Sleepy Swayam, he was too lazy to go to tani's room to check for and instead he texted her. 😆😆

Taani denying her feelings for Rey, but swayam understands her feeling,

I liked it the way he made her understand and give Rey a chance.

Swaron are too cute.

The last part Loved it.

Update soon

Love

Shivani

Edited by --Ecstasy-- - 9 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#605

awesome update
i loved swayam as a brother
i loved tanyam
awww swaron r so cute

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sbhanot65

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Posted: 9 years ago

#606

Awesome update...
Loved tayam...drew fyts,dere relationship..
Swaron ws cute...
Bt wanted to read sharon conveying her love to swayam
Bt updates r awesome...

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#607

omg super cute update

i really loved it... it was sweet and fun...

loved swayam as a brother...he was being so caring and mature

and loving more the understanding between swaron...

and the way sharon support swayam...

last was utter cute

qubul hai😆

totally loved it...😃

update soon😳

keechu😊

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NUPUR AGARWAL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#608

Cute update

swaron moments wre adorable

Agn loved d way tani teased him for his talent showcasing 😆

Want to read more ...so update soon 😊

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 9 years ago

#609

U r really a superb writer..very well written 👏

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GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#610

Hi der...

Hope u doing good

I myself ...well u can call me affii...

Not gonna b beating around da bush...coming straight to da point... .I m in love wid ur ff...so far so so so gud...actually perfect...

thanks to u n ur partner in crime ...crime as in gud sense yaar since u galz getting ppl addicted to ur work...I glued to dis thread since da very day u launched da prologue...

...well hatssoff hands down eyes n heart wide open to let each n every word jst sink in...dis is super ...

Everything is so damn perfect word to word ...bro-sis relationship is so cutely expressed ...der fyts ders taunts..ur characters r awesome (I was here for swaron bt gosh da oh-so-cool-mom has taken away my heart)...each event ...da revelation of Sharon da rj..da abandon corridot confrontation ...da canteen convo...da party... Da get together...etc... ..n yes I did never find it anywhere where could hv felt oh dis thing/dialogue has gone out of character...I m so damn madly liking dis Sharon...n da cherry on da cake...dose poems...ahhh...xtremly lovely...gud job...u ppl hv pulled on so long so well...dat even at 14-155chap where Sharon's word " few things r better left unsaid"don't get ur readers bored den u should know dis ff has taken a spcl place...

So dats my very very very short sumdup comment...hehe...n hoping to gt an update soon...

Keep up da grt work...

C u around

;)

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