SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 51

Originally posted by: --lavanya--

res
unres
me last...😭


coming to chappy 12 ,
the part where rey and tani teases swayam ...

i was rofling thinking about shan's sry swayam's expressions ..🤣
rey having a heart attack that swayam wrote a poem 🤣

i wish swayam reads out his poem in front of sharon
i liked the small msg convo ...😳
you maintained both the characters so welll ...👏

no one teased sharon...hehe...bechara swayam ...
then the poem which was for swayam...

ki kore likhis ? seriously ?

i think you guys should open a thread and post all the poems there...
the poem you wrote for this chappy was the show stopper for me ...

the poem was too good...!! 👏
just now i went to pick some lines frm the poem...
but all have the same wieght , written with the same passion...
so it would be copy paste ...which i'm not doing... 😆

but at the last sharon again says .."to why do you think its you"

i was like ' not again' 😛...

as a whole the entire chappy was a happy treat..!!..
as it's one of my fav ff ...i'll be waiting for pm...

cheers to writers ...!!

UPDATE SOONEST..!!

Lavanya

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Anj

Thank u for dis

I just loved dis

I loved each n every chappy of it

Dis chappy was really nice

Poor swayam

How much all tease him

N poem

Quite shocking for us

D little swaron moment was also nice

Update supersoon

Cant wait 2 wait more

Love

Mansi

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

awsum update

swayam so cutely saying aaj rey tani ne meri class li kl tumari bhi le lege...hahah😆😆

amazing as alwys...liked it

thank uh for pm

update soon

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

Awesome update..

TaaRey teasing Swayam..

I was smiling throughout..

Loved it.. Update soon..

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

i am rofling while reading it...

poor swayam, rey and taani was teasing him. lol...😆

so finally all good between swaron.😃

waiting for their confession..

please update soonish..

thanks.

-shivani

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update dear
aww swayam teasing taani was so cute
n taarey teasing swayam was most fev scene
it was so hilarious
yeh kya hain yar aur kitna sataoge swayam ko sharon this is not good tough i love to tease him
my poor swayam
n last bt not d list d poem god it was so beautiful

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

dats adorable... i so loveddd it... so cute... swayam ki class aur leni chahiye... xD

Originally posted by: tinku82

Nice update...

teasing and all loved it

and specially ur poems they are wonderful...

😊

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

🤣🤣

I was rolfing throughout this 😆

wht have u written? it was amazing once again...👏

i loved the start... aww my poor swayam...😆

taarey were tooo funny ... they took my swayam's class 😆, he really need it...😆

and he was adorable and cute😳

and i did not expect he will msg her directly.😆...even i felt there will be some awkwardness but nothing like that happened...😆 my expectations were broken 😭 😆

and the way swayam compliant about taarey's class was tooo cute😳

totally loved it...

now sharon playing with him😡

y everyone playing with him?😕 my poor boy.😳...dont know wht wil happenes to him till u update next part 😆

so update fast..waiting to read next soon😃

Keechu :)😉

Originally posted by: aneesha93

Awwwiiieee this was such a cute and hilarious update😛.

Taaarey teasing Swayam, Swayam threatening Rey and finally Swaron's texting. It was🤣

Pooh - pah, poor Swayam, Sharon too is teasing him saying she didn't tell a name.. Poor soul.

All in all, enjoyed the update to the core.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon