SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
hello gals ^_^
this story i liked the most from all the other
only for those beautiful words you give as dairy entries
very thoughtful and mature
and the little convo bw taani ans swayam
taani teasing sharon and the basket ball match very aptly written
the mystery gal the RJ though i can very well predict who it is *_*
gals get to work update soon

love ^_^




Edited by ..EnIgMa28.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Yayeee first chapter ^_^
Awww Sharon blush thinking about him :p and taani is no les in teasing her and making her go red even more :3
I loved the basketball thing, something new they played together in opposite teams :D
Swayam really did give her the trophy, hmm impressive character

Whats up with the boy :3 so much into love with the voice and he words ;)
He is gonna fall for her soon ^_^

Thanks
PS - I love your poems ❤️
Edited by sanchiswaron - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
omg this is sooo awesome..
from strt to end just loved it..
basket ball match, taani teasing sharon evrything.
the whole FM radio part was superb.loved what she said abt "sapne".great work👏
nd her diary part..beautifully written..👍🏼👍🏼
so m in love with this ff now..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

So waiting fr next update..nd excited..

Waiting to read "frm a looser to a winner"with sharon, few bits frm her diary nd ofcourse swaron story

Cant wait

Update soon

Edited by ujwalv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Absolutely loved the first chapter. Very well written👏. Loved the Taayam fight. It was adorable😛. The best brother - sister duo. Sharon beat Swayam in basketball match😲, that was great and I also loved how Swayam gave the trophy to her. He is such a gentleman😊. Swayam falling in love with her voice more and more...hayyeee and Sharon's diary wordings were awesome. Hope Swayam falls in love with the owner of the voice soon. Update soon. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
awesome update ani
luved the bb match

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
hey awesme update...
i thnk u gonna shw sharon falling for swayam n swayam falling for dat unknown girl...i so wnted dis to happen gr8 strt n yeah thnks foe the PM n hoping to read nxt part soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Hey...nice update
Awsumm strt...!!!
Thankz for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
First chapter yipeee😃
it was so guddd👏
i really liked taani's character
nd d fm part was awesome
bt d best part was d poem
loved it
update super soon
Edited by ritz15 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Tani is too much yr
M anjan logo se baat nhi krti
Hahaha

Swaron close to eachother..
Well done sharon


Swayam.himself played the fm
Wah

Thanks 4 d pm
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