SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 31

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sanchiswaron thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
No rush take it slow ^_^
Not what I expected but its surely better than that :p
Din think he would talk to her after knowing rather confront her :o but as he did her reaction was predictable since she still thinks he fell for just her thoughts and voice and not her :(
She need to wait to know hoe confused he was between Sharon and RJ and certainly liked both :')
Both are right on their part
Beautifully written :')
Take it more slowww :3 and write long conversations :'(

Loved it thanks a lot :*
Yet again the poem and her feelings _/\_ couldn't compliment better

Update soon ^_^
Edited by sanchiswaron - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res/unres
second to post..!!!
mind blowing one..!!!
loved it..!!!
swayam's pain was described well..!!!
i hope swayam ne suna ho..!!
uski baat..!!
waiting for the next part
update soon..!!!
Edited by nidhi.nidsnicks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poor swaron

Felt bad for them


Jaldi se patch up kra do yaar..

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Goosshhh* wiping my tears* 😭 😭 😭
Im not ling but this update really made me to cry
Im speechless😭
now i got to know the twist ... hmm so she is not accepting that she loves him.😡
i feel really bad swayam... dont know my heart was aching when he was talking to tanni as well as to sharon too
I really hope everything will fine soon...
but how? 😲 only u both knows😆
I loved the brother and sister relations ..
tanni's relation with swayam is really nice...i think its better with swayam..he really opened to her...i love that...
now i want to see wht will happen next...
really cant wait...
i know this time my comment not crazzy one bcoz not in a mood to comment like that , the reason is this update only...
wonderful works...beautifully written...
so update fast... now i know how to make u to update...😆

Keechu Di😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
u describe each n every word so well with emotion
update soon
thnx for pm

Anum :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Liked it but somewhr
I think he was too quick to react and confront
but his confusion and her's Q are right
on their own place...
nice update...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
the best decision to take it slow...as u said it will definitely give their characters more detail and depth...
very well written...the emotions of swayam and sharon well portrayed
taayam and taaron talks too were very good...
and last but not the least the poem in the end...taarif karne ke liye shabd hi nahi rehte kabhi...the last two lines depicting sharon's dilemma or KASHMAKASH as u said just perfectly...waiting for the next update i won't say hoping this or that in it coz i know u will turn the best possible way u can to the story...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update...i m feeling bad for swaron...sharon loves swayam beyond anything...nd swayam too...what ll happen nxt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely yet emotional update. Their reactions and emotions were very well penned👏. No no, please don't rush. Would love to see their detailed reaction and inner turmoil.
Thanks for the pm. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This update, I would like to say was emotionally beautiful..
I love Swayam's character.. His innocence is the best part. The way he was behaving childish, was really beautifully penned. And even Sharon's reaction made sense.. Good that the story is taking it's own sweet time to grow..
And TaaYam and Taani-Sharon bond was also superb..
And the poem, as always, khubshoorat..
Do update soon and thanks for da PM.,
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