SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 25

Originally posted by: prajana

Awsome awsome awsome!!

Swayam likes two girls..nd rey's reaction on this😛

While reading i badly wanted swayam to know that sharon is only the rj

So sharon thinks swayam likes somebdy else and vice versa..

I m loving how the story is heading

Update soon😊

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

From when did you start writing long chaps ;) no that I complain but really shock :3 keep giving them

Aah thanks for clearing it. So Taani know everything. Good. Sharon was hurt :( but abandoned corridor conversation was really something a step ahead, his concern was all visible along with the confusion. Atleast he made her happy again. Changing involuntary pain caused by him to voluntary smile ^_^

The Show's part was best by far *-*

I loved these lines -use parwa hai...aur mujhe pyaar... aur kya chahiye..."

^_^ describe her love so well in mere few words

Love without expectation

I super loved the poem _/\_

I always wonder how you two manage to make one according to the update.

So he admitted he like Sharon.

Like seriously he like two girls :v as per him though :p this is the funniest part :v Rey was right phle ladkiyan dekhta tak nhi tha now two at a time :3

I'm super excited for next chap

Thanks for the surprise :*

Originally posted by: trisha19

Loved this chapter!!

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Luvly update
Dat abandan corridor part ws awsum...
Swayam actually concerned for her...
So taani knws dat rj z non other den sharon...
Aww swayam lyk sharon bt confuse btwn her nd rj...
His talk wid rey ws hillarious...
Asalways luv d lines frm diary...
Update asap
Thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: ujwalv

I just loved swaron talk..

it was sooo cute, sweet , soothing, so dreamy.

swayam kitne cutely que puch raha tha..awww

swayam wanting to spend sm time with Sharon..could see dat through his behavior..nice

"jo humesha saath dete hai wo dost nahi hote par jo dukh share kare wo dost hote hai.." true

Loved this line- use parwa hai...aur mujhe pyaar

Nd as always beautiful poem.👏👍🏼

And these lines👏

"As you held my hands and gave me a smile

Did you feel my heart skip a beat?

As you looked at me just for a while

Did you feel me shiver in the heat?"

so he likes Sharon nd RJ

Nd ReYam part - the most funniest part..loved it..

I love pagal ReYam's funny talks.😆

"aaj tak tujhe koi bhi pasand nahi ata tha... you were scared and stuff... and ab jab feelings aya to ek saath dono k liye???"

"so ja..." Rey said...

"hamesha ke liye????" swayama sked him in shock...

"abbey kal subah tak... milke baat karte hai... and I will take appointment from a psycyatist..." 👏😆🤣

plz update jaldi..cant wait

Originally posted by: vrushanlove

Again i m speechless...this tym you made a longer update...thankyou for that ...i loved swaron convo...nw swayam is confused...loving dat...nd reyam covo ,i m still smiling...
Not the least...your poem...well done guys..
Thankyou for the pm...will be waiting for your nxt update...

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Ohhh so the great secret is out which was never a secret for us...😆

It was the best update ever... very well written... it was blend of many emotions ...

loved it to the core...👏👏

Start was cool... loved the taayam bits 😛

Loved the swaron through out the part ...they were really bcom so comfortable with each other...i loved the change... he is still a buddhhuuu😆He cant see her love for him... blind swayam😆😆..

try to look at those eyes yaar which is waiting for ur one love filled look😳... but he is a never ending budhhhuu...and at the end it was super buddhuuu swayam...

Loving two girls😲

feeling for two girls...😲... world's next wonder... 😆😆...🤣

he is such a cutieee...i was laughing uncontrollably at there 🤣

And poem,,, nthing to say abt that... such a deep lines... well written👏

Next budddhuuu rey🤣... Gosshhh everyone is out of mind...😆

"I like someone..."

"wo to malum hai...tune bataya nahi name..varna I would have set you up with her..."

Swayam totally ignored rey and continued...

"actually I like some two..." He said nervously...

"kya????" rey was horrified...

this is the best part...i never laughed like this while reading ur updates...

Goosshhh it was outstanding one... like it to the hell ...

Now i cant wait more to read this... each updates fascinating me ... i want to knw story nowww plzzz😃

Update fast u both ohk...

Love u both...😳

~Keechu

Originally posted by: tinku82

This is really hilarious

First it was no one

and now suddenly two of them...😆

thts funny but awesome update...👏😊

Originally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..

^Unres^

surprised!!! never mind😆

this chapter was amazing as always

i felt proud of sharon really she is one strong woman here

and iam falling in love with her in this particular update

iam happy that you guys revealed the secret *who the RJ really was*

though i dont think was a real secret to all of us😆

swayam was real weried he was falling for sometwo really now

and the words from the dairy this is the best par in the whole update

and practically i look forward to read some beautiful words

gals let me tell you write those in hindi they are effective

i dont say in english its bad but in hindi they connect easily *my opinion though*

gals i dont wanna wait for the next update now so dont make me

update supersoon

love

^_^