SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
Again i m speechless...this tym you made a longer update...thankyou for that ...i loved swaron convo...nw swayam is confused...loving dat...nd reyam covo ,i m still smiling...
Not the least...your poem...well done guys..
Thankyou for the pm...will be waiting for your nxt update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh so the great secret is out which was never a secret for us...πŸ˜†
It was the best update ever... very well written... it was blend of many emotions ...
loved it to the core...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Start was cool... loved the taayam bits πŸ˜›
Loved the swaron through out the part ...they were really bcom so comfortable with each other...i loved the change... he is still a buddhhuuuπŸ˜†He cant see her love for him... blind swayamπŸ˜†πŸ˜†..
try to look at those eyes yaar which is waiting for ur one love filled look😳... but he is a never ending budhhhuu...and at the end it was super buddhuuu swayam...
Loving two girls😲
feeling for two girls...😲... world's next wonder... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...🀣
he is such a cutieee...i was laughing uncontrollably at there 🀣
And poem,,, nthing to say abt that... such a deep lines... well writtenπŸ‘
Next budddhuuu rey🀣... Gosshhh everyone is out of mind...πŸ˜†

"I like someone..."

"wo to malum hai...tune bataya nahi name..varna I would have set you up with her..."

Swayam totally ignored rey and continued...

"actually I like some two..." He said nervously...

"kya????" rey was horrified...


this is the best part...i never laughed like this while reading ur updates...
Goosshhh it was outstanding one... like it to the hell ...
Now i cant wait more to read this... each updates fascinating me ... i want to knw story nowww plzzzπŸ˜ƒ
Update fast u both ohk...
Love u both...😳



~Keechu



Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is really hilarious
First it was no one
and now suddenly two of them...πŸ˜†
thts funny but awesome update...πŸ‘πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
^Unres^

surprised!!! never mindπŸ˜†

this chapter was amazing as always

i felt proud of sharon really she is one strong woman here

and iam falling in love with her in this particular update

iam happy that you guys revealed the secret *who the RJ really was*

though i dont think was a real secret to all of usπŸ˜†

swayam was real weried he was falling for sometwo really now

and the words from the dairy this is the best par in the whole update

and practically i look forward to read some beautiful words

gals let me tell you write those in hindi they are effective

i dont say in english its bad but in hindi they connect easily *my opinion though*

gals i dont wanna wait for the next update now so dont make me

update supersoon

love

^_^




Edited by ..EnIgMa28.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yeee my guess was right
awww swaron convo was so sweet
hayeee waise swayam ko kya pta ek hi ldki pr dil aya hain poor hi
lol reyam convo was hilarious
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
woww... awsm update... refreshing & sweet... finally swayam understood his feelings... well written... do update soon... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

This FF is getting with each update.. πŸ˜ƒ

I knew it Taani knows everything. πŸ˜ƒ

Convo between swaron and swayam's reaction hearing it. 😊

So swayam has started feeling for Sharon something. πŸ˜ƒ

Actually for two. πŸ˜†

Loved the whole Convo between Rey and Swayam. Hilarious they are. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"I like someone..."

wo to malum hai...tune bataya nahi name..varna I would have set you up with her..."

Swayam totally ignored rey and continued...

"actually I like some two..." 🀣

"kya????" rey's expression 🀣


"aaj tak tujhe koi bhi pasand nahi ata tha... you were scared and stuff... and ab jab feelings aya to ek saath dono k liye???" πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"kya??? Tu pagal ho gaya?? Ya fir aunty ko call karoon?? Unka beta ghar pe drink kar raha hai????" 🀣🀣


"abbey kal subah tak... milke baat karte hai... and I will take appointment from a psycyatist..." rey smiled...πŸ˜†

I had a good laugh reading it. πŸ˜ƒ

Update soon. 😊

-Shivani


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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't know what to say about this ff and the update. It was superb😊. Loved Swaron conversation in the corridor and how he kept thinking about Sharon. Bechara, is totally confused. Reyam conversation was hilarious. Firstly, he was scared and finally when he started to like someone he ended up liking two🀣 (Though that idiot can't realize it is the same person). Hope everything will be cleared soon. I wanna know what will be Rey's suggestion to his totally confused friend. Loving the way how story has progressedπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cool update..

I have feelings for two...

Poor swayam..
Don't worry dude botha are same
.sharon
Loved it

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update once agn...so i was ri8 tani knows abt sharon being d RJ bt i wish ki swayam too finds out dat soon n realises his feelings for sharon bt i guess dats gonna happen soon as swayam is gettng confused abt his feelings for sharon n RJ n Rey n Swayam convo was nyc n d best part was wen rey said ki "pehle toh toh iss feeling se hi bhagta tha darta tha n ab feelings aayi bhi toh ek sath do ke liye"πŸ˜† n swayam n sharon convo was nyc hw swayam shows concern for sharon really loving d way story is progressing

n each poem potrays d emotions of sharon so beautifully eagerly w8tng for d nxt update

Update soon n thanks foe d PM😊

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