SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 20

Astha singh

@3sisters

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Kash swayam ne girl me bare me jada bola hota jis se sharon samjh pati ki changes lane vali vo kudh hai bechari sad ho gai soch ke ki vo kisi girl ko pasand karta hai thanks for the pm

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priya

@priya_sejwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Nice update

Taarey trying to find tht girl...nice

Eagerly waiting for revelation of Rj identity...then how will swayam react to it?

Poem was Very nice...too good

Thnk uh for pm

Update soon

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Seriously i hav no words to say abt this ff...i m totaly addicted to it...everything abt this ff is amazing...love you both...
Nd ur poems...outstanding...especially the last lines ..i love the most...waiting for the nxt update...

Nd thankyou for the pm

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Poor sharon
Bt don't worry shar..
Swayam will be there for you always...

Thanks 4 d pm

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Lab chahte hai muskarana dharkan nahi...

Ankhon ko manzoor hai dard...ansoon ko nahi...

dis lines r so heart wrenching... loved d update... & mostly d end part... ur poem is superb... god bless

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Sharon was heartbroken when Swayam told about the girl.

Hope swayam realizes soon the Rj is Sharon only.

I love Taani-Sharon bond..

I have confusion, do Taani knows that the RJ is Sharon.?

Loved the Poem.

Update soon

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..RiSha..

@..RiSha..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

hey gals

very well written chapter again

sharon is hurt but i liked the way swayam explained his change

though it hurt sharon for the worst but she is a strong lady to let go having no expectations

no time to write a detailed comment

but it was a lovely chapter

do update soon

love *_*

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

awesome update poor sharon she is so upset hope swayam aur described krta us ldki ki y im hving d feeling that taani knows abt rj

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Komal

@koms_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Awesome update day by day I'm falling more for this ff. Plz update next chapter soon and thanks for pm

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

great update

so swayam confessed nd hearing that sharon is sad😭

I love sharon nd taaani's bond. she is a true frnd.

nd my fav part - The show

i loved it..

it was awesome as always.

"chalte chalte priorities differ kar jaate hai... dosti ke saath jo unkahe promises hote hai ... with time wo bhul jaate hai sab... kisike liye iski reason hai ego , self respect ya fir you know... Mai kyun pehele call karoon... ye khayal... but asli reason hai ignorance... apne uss rishte ko agar for granted loge to wo chali jayegi... never to turn again."

completely agree

nd poem was as usual 👍🏼

loved these lines

"Achanak zindagi ko akelepan ne satatya...

Sare wade tod wo humein akela chor gaya...

Keheta hai wo hua hai use pyaar...

Nayi hai ehsaas , roz nayi ikraar...

Khush hai hum uske khushi mein...

Par is khushi mein bhi kayi gam chipi hai"

Edited by ujwalv - 9 years ago

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