SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 17

Heyaa...

Awesome
Awesome
Nd
Awesome
Chappy

Lovely
Orphanage rain everything is just perfact

Loved it

Thanks 4 d pm

awsm update... cute, sweet ... & finally swayam acpted dat he is changing... nice... looking forward fr d next chapters... 😊

A very beautiful update

update soon need some relief

hey pls update waitng to read d nxt chp n yeah pls update ur other ff too 😭

Originally posted by: ndcdance

Res / unres
yaayyy 1st..😆

loved the update.. !!!

sharon and swayam..awwwieee😳

swayam scared for her...

and rj understands his thot.. ;)

update aap

tanks

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Originally posted by: ..EnIgMa28..

never mind ani iam glad you updated today

this chapter had a different feel in it

a total different side of swayam and the effect of sharon on him

that stall part was really nice swayam playing with tamanna was really cute added an grace to swayams personality

and sharons adorable gesture though its a puppy its quite clear how good she is from the heart

and swayams ragging fear of losing sharon his reaction jus by the mere thought that something culd happen to sharon he had lost it

again my fav part the RJ though i wished she wouldspeak for a little long speak about the uncertainties. . fears. . and love. .

again those few words they were truly amazing and i loved RJs entries *no offence* they were deep and touched me

the final words of swayam admitting that he was changing but bewildered *is it a known face or a unknown voice* very apt very crisp

all in all very good chapter

waiting for more

and until you update the next part i wud b keep budging you

so gals be quick

love *_*

thanks for the lovely comment

Originally posted by: nidhi.nidsnicks

res/unres

awesome update

loved it

mind-blowing

loved how swayam scolded her

and

after that she jumped in the puddle😃

update the nxt part soon

thanks for the pm di

thank u

Originally posted by: tinku82

awesome...😊

I really wonder your peoms or may b thoughts

are really some kind of magic creating senses...

fantastic...👏

keep writing...

thanks

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