This is so good. I love the way you portray Swayam, his simple caring nature very much evident. Poor him is so stressed and his friends trying to comfort him and betting on the child. :v
Poor Sharon too, that girl must be in so much pain.
Great writing as always. :)
Eager to read further.
Cheers.
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Ah. I love the topic of this write up. I have read a lot of stuff on Babies and SwaRon. But I love this whole set up when their baby is actually coming to their lives. The emotional content of this work is great to read. The emotions of Swayam have been so perfectly written. That moment from where he knows Sharon is in labour. And his panic and anxiety. In that serious moment Amar and Neilesh's way of consoling crack me up. The way Swayam is tensed about Sharon. Thats was beautiful. Waiting for the next part. Post it soon. :D
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