SWARON SS 'THE FAULT IN OUR STARS'(updated PG7) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swayam is deeply nd badly hurt..
Hope sharon do something special for him..

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great update..letter part was really emotional..
excited abt d next part
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Emotional update :) update soon plz cant wait to read further :) :)
Edited by Swaronvrushan00 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
This new ss of yours is just beautiful
Just loved it , pain of separation is so finely written
Update sooner
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This os is really awsum ! Plzz do update soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Wow ,...
It was amazing๐Ÿ˜›
The letter was tooo emotional...๐Ÿ˜ญ
Swayam is really too hurt...
Hope sharon do something special for him...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Plzz update soon...and pm me...๐Ÿ˜‰


Keechu !!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3


swayam:sharon tumne pehle cycle pe ane keliye zidd ki par abhi car keliye insist ki i dint get u..

sharon:woh swayam...abhi boht raat ho gye hai..cycle ride is not safe in current situation๐Ÿ˜Š


swayam:really ?๐Ÿ˜†

sharon:yaa now drive..speech and drive not good ๐Ÿ˜ณ

swayam now concentrate on his audi a8 driving and sharon goes to her deep thoughts..


sharon's monolouge:i know swayam tum bohot shocked ho gye meri iss behaviour se ..par kya karu i need to do all this..main tumhe
istarah pain mein nahi dekh sakti..its killed me from inside to read ur words..i dont know i have enuf strength to read ur rest letters
or not but i will keep u away from all this pain swayam..i will baby...maine tumhe pain diya hai naa abb main hi use heal
karungi by my love...regret se sirf situation worst hotha hai ...agar app apki past ko better karo by ur present and future then
thats the best way to overcome pain nd sorrows ...we have to overcome the fault in our stars swayam..we have to :)

swayam:sharon kya soch rahi ho?


sharon:woh swayam kuch nahi...anyway swayam tum marve beach ka road lo pls...

swayam:sharon issbakt woh jagah bohot zyaada sunsan hai..its too risky there...

sharon:tum ho naa mere saath mujhe koi daar nahi hai..pls lets go i want to walk in sand with u in moonlit night..its my dream
swayam pls

swayam:sharon pls

sharon:no please...just drive na


without anychoice swayam drove and they reached marve beach within 30 mins


the view of beach in moonlit night is heavenly...the sea is too silent .like the sea saying




Do not count what u have lost

just see what u have now

beacause past never comes back but
sometimes future can give you back

your lost things




sharon(innervoice)

yaa swayam we might have lost some precious days of our togetherness...we might have lost some precious momement of our lovelife..but we have a long bright future together

we will make many beautifull memories,many beautifull days together which will cover up every pain, every bad memories

we will make our world beautifull swayam...we will repair together the fault in our stars...


swayam:sharon sharon kaha kho gyi?

sharon:tum mein ๐Ÿ˜ณ

swayam:nice joke :) anyway mam can u please tell me now hum iha abhi kyun aye hai aur kya karne aye hai...๐Ÿ˜‰

sharon:swayam tum kabse itne impatient ho gye ho ..wait for few moments u will understand


sharon:yeh samundar dekh rahe ho swayam...its glitering in moonlite...its beautifull

swayam:yaa its must be beautifull..but iss duniya mein koi bhi cheez kuch bhi tumse zyaada khoobsurat nahi hai sharon..u define khoobsurty my love...

sharon:really? (with tears of happiness in her eyes)

swayam:haan sharon...yeh moon yeh samundar tumhare khoobsurti ke samne feeka hai...woh dekho stars bhi tumhare khoobsurti se insecure hoke cloud mein chup gye hai...

sharon:tumhe pata hai swayam...

swayam:haan bolo sharon

sharon:bachpan mein dad mujhe harroj raat ko iha laate the .humlog roj dinner ke baad longdrive ke liye jaate the...dad aur mam aksar iha sand castle banate the...
bachpan mein dad mujhe princess ki tarah treat karte the...still he does the same par bachpan dad mere saath aur pass dono the abhi sirf saath hai paas nahi..dad
fulfilled my each and every wish...maine jo chaha woh diya...par dad aur mom dono hi mujhe door ho gye main jab thoda badi hui...they fullfilled my each nd every demand

but they were too busy in their professional life mere liye unke pass time hi nahi tha...meri har bday mein main akeli thi.rey tha mere saath...par main rey ke saath bhi utna close nahi thi jitna main mom,dad aur tumhare saath hu...main kab khud hi khudko duniya se door kar diya

mujhe pata hi nahi chala...main apni akelapan chupane keliye egoistic materialistic ban gyi...har cheez se zyaada apni image maintain ko priority dene laga..

kab main sweet simple sharanjeet se sharon the diva ban gyi pata hi nahi chala..kab main khudke image maintain karne keliye mere aaspaas ke logo ko hurt karne
lagi unintentionally pata nahi chala..log mujhse daar the the baat karne keliye..main bhi bohot khus tha logoki yeh bebasi dekh ke

par mujhe pata hi nahi tha wohlog bebas nahi main bebas hu..main hu victim akelapan ka...diva image mein itni kho gyi ki pata hi nahi chala yeh duniya kitni khoobsurat hai

simplicity mein...(some lonely tears comes from her eyes)

swayam:he wiped her tears ..sharon tumhe kitni baar kaha hai naa yeh jo moti hai naa tumhari aankhon mein bohot precious hai.just like u my love and sharon hold on..arey itna kuch eksaath ...thoda rest lelo aur pani pee lo..(swayam tries to lighten the mood and passed the water bottle)

sharon:she drank water..and again continues...

tumhe pata hai swayam main itni rude kyun thi pehle tumhare saath?

swayam:no...kyun sharon..

sharon:woh isliye kyunki tum mujhe ek open book ki tarah pad rahe the jab ki main apne realself ko duniya se chupa rahi thi...main tumse jab pehli baar mila tab hi

mujhe tum pasand aa gye the..tumhe dekhkar mujhe bohot khushi hothi thi..par mera ego mujhe tumse milne nahi deta tha...main isiliye tumse door jaa rahi thi

kyunki mujhe lagta tha agar main kisiko phirse pyaar kar baithu like my mom-dad woh bhi mujhe door ho jayega..tum bhi mujse door ho jaoge agar main tumhe pyaar
kiya toh..parr tumne meri sari insecurities ki dewaar todh ke mujhe own kiya..tumhe aajtak nahi pata naa main kyun tumhe sabke samne reject kiya tha college mein?

kyun sabke samne humari relationship ko denial kiya tha?

swayam:sharon leave it naa ..its a painfull era of our love..pls forget all this..

sharon:swayam please let me say...

swayam:ok first lets have dinner together then we will spend the night together in my terace and will try to mend all our fault in stars ...

both heads to a restuorant named "icy spicy"near to the beach by their car...the whole restourant was mostly void now as its too late night...

the interior of the restourant was too dreamy...and the restuorant's speciality is its theme and its theme is rain-forest and there is only light source present is candle light...after visiting the place you will feel
that u have reached 1000 years ago in a dreamy romantic forest in midnight...
swayam and sharon both got astonished by the ambience...
sharon:its beautifull..its so soothing na swayam..

swayam:no nothing is more beautifull than u my love nd about soothing ur presence is the only thing in my life that can sooth me(utter silently) sharon heard that...
then both got sitted in a corner next to the artificial fountain...


sharon:swayam tumhe pata hai maine iss 1 year mein ek bar bhi yeh restuorant nahi ayi...im so happy to come here after so many days...this restauorant makes me remember our live in days

swayam:a lonely tear sheded from swayam's eye

sharon:sharon kiss that tear away by her rosy lips

sharon:he cups swayam's face tum kyun itna kuch akela tollerate karte ho..kyun meri har baat mante ho khud ko hurt karke bhi..kyun bar bar khudbo hurt karke bhi meri wish ur command hai swayam kyun tell me why? and she stars crying

swayam:swayam ka life hi hai sharon ki wish ko fullfill karna sharon..yeh swayam jinda hai toh uski sharon ko khush dekhne keliye...agar mere hurt hone se bhi meri sharon khush hothi hai i want to take all the hurts sharon...i love you so much ki i cant even see u cry i cant even see u cry cause of me sharon.. and swayam breaksdown
completely

sharon:tum itna kuch apne andar dabe ke rakhe the swayam..itna pain kaise swayam..tum kaise kar lete ho yehsab tell me how? she asked crying

waiter:sir mam apka order is ready can we serve now please

swaron:ya ya sure and sorry
waiter:he serves their food and said dot worry sir this restuorant is for lovers privacy and sorting issues...u guys enjy and all the best for ur future u both look perfect for eachother..
swaron:thank u so much nd smiles lightly
sharon comes to swayam and sat in swayam's lap
sharon takes a spoon nd fed swayam nd swayam does the same viceversa...both enjoyed their candlelight dinner silently and after paying the biill swayam comes to sharon

swayam:sharon its too late lets go ..main tumhe jaldi drop kar deta hu nahito aunty paresaan hogi

sharon:no

swayam:what no..

sharon:u are not dropping me anywhere

swayam:then ? asked with strange expression

sharon:u are not dropping me anywhere cause from now on i will live with you only in ur house and in ur room too understand idiot

swayam:but sharon its not good
i
sharon:are u ashamed of me swayam?

swayam;what are u saying sharon are u mad..u r my prized possesion
sharon:then why cant we live together again swayam?
swayam:sharon i dont want another goofup now in our life i cant afford to loose u now..agar kuch bhi hua aur man tumhe kho diya toh i will not able to survive

sharon:she puts her finger in swayam's lips...tum naa bht zyaada sochte ho aur bolte bhi ho...sharon rai prakash ooops sharon swayam shekhawat ke hubby
ko itna bolna not allowed and swayam past ki galti se hi toh hum sikhte hai na..our live in phrase was my most beautifull phrase of life and
abbse hum saath milke saare fault correction karenge ekdoosre se ladke ek dusre ki fault ko solve karke am i right or my right baby?

swayam:oohk still in deep confusion...
sharon:swayam jaldi chalo.kal se we have so many works to do ...
swayam:kya?
sharon:we need to resolve all "The fault in our stars"..we will correct all the errors all the goofups of last 1 year...but uske pehle i need to tell you

kyun main itna rude thi tumare saath,maine kyun tumhe sabke samne reject kiya tha aur bhi bohot sare issues hai shivam ka issue hai ruhi ka hai we will discuss in moonlight terece tonight..only u and meโค๏ธ
swayam:ok ur wish is always my command love
sharon:same with me swayam ur wish is my commad too now drive ๐Ÿ˜Š

precap:swaron bedroom and swimming pool romance and Bua and illu's reentry






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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved d update so emotional hw dey let out dre pain n sharon decided to stay wid swayam dat too in his room so surprising nw really wnted to read d nxt chp
precap is so amazing ๐Ÿ˜ณcnt w8 bt bua n illu reentry really shockng pls no fights or ny misunderstandng between swaron as sharon wil be stayng wid swayam hope dey dnt create trouble for swaron ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

PS- hate dis bua n illu worst ever track of d3๐Ÿ˜ก

Edited by swaronicfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow nice update..i ws waiting for this..i needed to read something like this ...as our swaron story ws winded up abrubtly in d3...loved ur story line...pls uppdate the nxt part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Finally an update. The update was awesome๐Ÿ˜Š. Swaron conversations, beach walk, she opening upto Swayam, restaurant scene everything was well written.
Please update sooner.
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