FF: To Be or Not to Be. [Chap4. Pg 24] - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Wow! Its really nice! Update next chapter soon!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by SwarSrushti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
It was awesome...
loved it...
continue soon...waiting to read...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Okay, the best part about the update is Bora Bora destination that you decided for SwaRon's honeymoon. Personally, I am in love the aura of that place. How Divine a place it is!
Keeping my dreaming mode apart & coming to the chapter, it was simply Sweet-to be precise.

SwaRon's convo part was so lovable. Their old, notorious parents & that weird honeymoon room setup. Oh my that made me laugh out loud. That was just so Cheesy๐Ÿ˜†
Sharon scolding Swayam in such a adorable way for oogling Air- Hostess ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Now, Swayam's red face & those expressions on his face- fun to imagine๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Sharon wants to discuss & divide their household duties- looking forward to it.

I thoroughly enjoyed this update. Honestly, i was wearing a smile throughout.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

Edited by ayushimehrotra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
a new ff
the prologue is interesting
sharon and swayam are best friends getting married to each other
i specially likd this line
dunno y!!
"She wondered if the designers had assumed that Indian girls were weightlifters".
coming to the update
good start
seems promising
the first chapter is interesting
their parents teasing these poor souls
their embarresment
and the chit sharon gave to swayam
i wanna read more of this ff
please update soon
...waiting

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Hey finally here..Really loved the prologue and the first chapter.Can't wait to see what happened next in Bora Bora ๐Ÿ˜†
Also what is Sharon upto๐Ÿ˜•
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
That was a fabulous start. I'm really excited for the chapter.
Update soon.
It's mystery and romance and thrill.
And the best it's SwaRon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
' Spilt household chores.' What does that mean?

I love their bond. It has a litlle of both BFF and Husband-Wife
Okay the honeymoon suite was little OTT. I was mortified.
Loved the update.
Thanks for the PM. Update soon.
I'm waiting eagerly.

PS. The banner is Khoobsurat.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
a) come to daddy :v
b) 'looks to another girl'.. Swayam Shekawat :O
c) 'twisted his ear' .. SRP B|
d) how on earth r u my best friend .. sometimes i wonder the same :P
e) his ear turning red :v
f) we need to split household duties B| ... &
g) bora bora airport
h) for this update ๐Ÿคฃ
last but not the least
*) for the writer B|
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
The Parents and Swayam-Sharon convo was hilarious ๐Ÿคฃ Can so imagine their mortified expresssions. The usual progress after a wedding this chapter was about. Them setting off to a honeymoon. I loved the airplane part. Ending is hilarious. Poor Swayam dieing to sleep. And their Sharon comes with her splitting the household duties talk ๐Ÿคฃ Looking forward to the next one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Due to time constraints, couldn't reply to your lovely comments.

But, know that I am really gateful. Thank you, everyone.

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