OS: The Day It Began. - Page 2

this was really a gud os

swayams monologue

his initial reaction wen sharon turned back

and lukd at him

how swayam explained his attraction a girl..wow

a small but impactful,splendid work of yours

you realy write soo superb

words fall short

keep writing

I loved Swayam's emotions. His reaction to see Sharon for the first time and he surely loved her like no other. Love at first sight for him. All those flutter of emotions and unable to decipher his state was very well depicted.

Enjoyed it a lot 😃

You're an amazing writer man ! 👏

This was a brilliant piece ! 😃

Now more excited I am ..to read the continuation of this os !

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