first of all
i am sorry for not commenting earlier
ma sries exams are goin on
but i read it the moment you update
#1
swayam hates chocolates
how can he ??
but sharon loves it
their convo was so cute
you pnned it well
good job
and at last swayam liked the chocolate
ah the KISS ...superb
#2
the promise
if the first one was cue
this was emotional
swayam has crippled legs
but still sharon is wid him
she lovs him
and is maintaining her promise to him
their bond is so superb real and eternal
When I said I love you for what you are, I meant it. When I said you make me happy by just existing, I meant it.
i lovd this one
#3
i had lovd the os Love in paris
this was indeed very much a treat to read
the impatient swayam
sharons fearbrave girl
she initiated the kiss
swayams reaction and the
last dialoguereallly
well done
#4
they have not yet confessed
swayam s alarm is really ...
the diva sharon really gets
affected bythe loverboy
swayam toook her to the hill top
waiting to read more
update soon
part2 come soon :P
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