Valentine Four-Drabble Series| #4 Part 2. Page 11. - Page 5

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Res

Unres

Nishi

How could u

U made me cry

Bt i loved it

Accepting a person with his defects is love

N sharon did dat

U awesomely described d whole part

It can have been more beautiful

Keep writing

Love

Mansi

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Adorable...

It was quite emotional...

Nice 😛

Swayam's guilt , sharon's care &concern for him...n their pure love for each other...liked it!!!!

PROMISE amazing OS...

Originally posted by: ujwalv

nice.liked it👍🏼

Word Count: 1

Originally posted by: riachawlalko

read both the parts together
the first part was really cute n lovely
n this part really left me in tears
u wrote it so well
i loved both the parts <3
update soon
n thanks fr d pm :)

Originally posted by: id2useit

A very emotional write up

u have beautifully penned down what swaron were going through

and my fav part was

"I am patient Swayam. But trust me, I am hurt too. 'I LOVE YOU' aren't just three words Swayam, its a promise that I'll be by your side whenever I am needed. You have taught me that Swayam, and now you expect me to break the promise just coz your legs went to sleep. Honestly?"

keep writing more...😊

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Aww so sweet and beautiful one..

Short one but still it was touching...

Loved each and every word...

with love

keechu di

Originally posted by: Dew..

you are such an Amazing writer !!
I love your writeup, Keep up the good work :)