Valentine Four-Drabble Series| #4 Part 2. Page 11. - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
It couldnot get better
It was touching seriously
Best Drabble for promise :')
Keep writing
Loved the concept
Edited by sanchiswaron - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
read both the parts together
the first part was really cute n lovely
n this part really left me in tears
u wrote it so well
i loved both the parts <3
update soon
n thanks fr d pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
its so nice, so emotional...so well written :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
How come i was missing this series? 😲 Nishayvithaa 🤗 (Dont mind me taking ur full name. I remember it and i love it more than Nishi 😛 😆) Abhi i read just the first part so commenting only on that. You wanted to make your choice as Sharon's, didn't you? Harry Potter and all 😛 But i really wonder how can someone hate chocolate? 😲 Swayam is strange But he must be in love with chocolates after the kiss 😉 A very nice part. I loved it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Damn! How could you? The second series was really emotional. I just loved it. You have become such a wonderful writer meri jaan. You did a fab job 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
^My god Muski. I am shocked to see you here. :O
I don't mind you calling by my full name :P
Yep. You guessed it right, I was on Sharon's side. 😉
Thanks a lot for the appreciation Jaan. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
A very emotional write up
u have beautifully penned down what swaron were going through
and my fav part was
"I am patient Swayam. But trust me, I am hurt too. 'I LOVE YOU' aren't just three words Swayam, its a promise that I'll be by your side whenever I am needed. You have taught me that Swayam, and now you expect me to break the promise just coz your legs went to sleep. Honestly?"
keep writing more...😊
Edited by id2useit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Aww so sweet and beautiful one..
Short one but still it was touching...
Loved each and every word...

with love
keechu di
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
RESERVED
UNRESERVED.


Wow the OS was amazing. I'm speechless.
The way the drabble started and the way it ended.
Really strong emotions. Swayam feeling guilty and Sharon all confused.
Really enjoyed it.
Definitely a promise of a lifetime. - I love you.

Sorry for the late feedback. Thanks for the PM.
Short comment. Exams!

--isha
Edited by -spongy- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
you are such an Amazing writer !!
I love your writeup, Keep up the good work :)
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