||The Dark Duet|| SwaRon Dark Fiction|Chapter 4 - PG 43*22/7 PMs later - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Finally u updated๐Ÿ˜Š. It was an amazing start. But Swayam ruining innocent girls life๐Ÿ˜•? Anyway all in all, its gud. Nice concept. Looking forward to see how the story will unfold.
Thanks for the pm.

Ps: All the best for your boards
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Nice chapter
but confusing
but u wrote it well
will wait for the update
Best of luck for your boards
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Amazing introduction!
Loved it <3
Beautifully written
Sharon and the dream and Taani being the amazing best friend :)
What happened in Swayam's life that he is ruining other girls' lives?
Can't wait to read more
Update asap! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
suprbb..
beautiful start..
loved itt to da core!!!
thnxx fo pm ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
So Swayam was nice at a point of time and someone ruined him.Interesting!

I wonder what Sharon's dreams mean!

And how these both are going to collide.

Your writing style is lovely. I really would like to congratulate on that. It has a lovely flow and a novel kind of feel. Keep it Up.

And Guess we all would have to wait for the update :(

All the best for exams :)

Chitra :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Amazing update...waiting to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Amazing start,, Sharon's mystery man.. It must be swayam..
Taani-Sharon bond looks nice..
So Swayam was a nice person and one incident or rather due to girl he changed himself.. Interesting..
Very nicely written...
I know we have to wait long for the update.. Anyways hope u pass ur exams with flying colors..
Good luck..
P.S.- I loved the banner.

Thanks for PM.๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Vani20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
nice update... liking d concept... do update whn u get time. & all d best fr ur exams. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Intro is just awesome...
Want to knw abt their past...
Will definetly wait fr 26th march...coz xams frst...
All the best fr ur xams...
Nd thanx fr pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice update...will wait for the next one ..all the best for ur exams..
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