||The Dark Duet|| SwaRon Dark Fiction|Chapter 4 - PG 43*22/7 PMs later - Page 15

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

So small part 😭

Plzz give us a long update next time 😉

Hehehe...😆

But it so nice to read...

Start was cool 😆

Loved tanni and sharon ..

Their bond is so sweet...😳

And first sight was interesting 😉

Looking forward to read more of this swaron...

Update soon and pm me...

Thanks for the pm...

And the last part i mean first chapter was so nice...👏

U penned it so beautifully

Sharon's nightmare and swayam's thoughts r mysterious ...

Loved it...

~Keechu~😳

Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago

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Shradha

@ShradhaP13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Plzzz Continue and update soon...

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Superb...continue...and give a looong update...

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Great update.

I liked the glimpse of Taani-Sharon's friendship you gave, hope to see some more of it.

And the way Sharon banged straight into Swayam. Swayam is such a 'player' and Sharon, I found her reaction funny, a bit. I am eager to read how Swayam turns out in the future.

You write well. :)

Cheers.

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Good 👏

Thanks for the pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Nice chappy dear
Swaron meet.is goodgood

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Please do continue niru
I loved read abt swaron
N a different swayam

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Jasmine_ash

@Jasmine_ash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Res :) / unres

Niru it was so unique

I am reading such stuff like Sharon becoming nervous

But it was beautifully written

Loved to see different SWAYAM and Sharon

Taani and Sharon little convo was funny. Taani behaving mature lol

Swaron encounter again different

Sharon feeling something for him

And SWAYAM too

Sounds interesting

Pls next part soon

_/\_

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Nice update
I lyk taani nd sharon frndship...
Swaron first meet ws gud...
Let see wts nxt...
Update soon
Thnx fr pm

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