Res :D
Will unres after reading all parts till now :) By tom pakka:)
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Unres :)
Phew! Took quite some time to read the parts carefully :P
Liked the concept
Always love to read stuff jaha pata hai SwaRon are going to get married :)
Prolougre was really good... Liked the dadi.. She's cool.. Wish I had one like that :P
Chap 1-
Loved to see the concern of dadi for Swayam... That was really cute :)
Liked the slaps too which that guy got ๐ laughed nicely that time :D
Chap 2-
TaaYam ka bond reminded me of me & my bro... Seriously after reading the Taayam scene I stopped reading & went & hugged my bro ๐ณ It was that effective;)
Poor Taani ka neend karabh kiya :(
Sharon is sad :(
But all in all good update :)
Character sketch -
Okay so TaaRey secret relationship and all ;)
Yeh fast forward thoda confusing hai :P but I guess further updates confusion clear kar degi :)
But SwaRon kab milenge :\ -____-
Waiting for 18th may your next update:)
-Love Ana :)
Edited by taareyswarond3 - 9 years ago
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