Everyone THANK YOOU SOO SOO MUCH fr ur reviews..they really motivate me..
Here is the frst part of the stry...plz give ur reviews..gud bad..anything..bt do tell me..it helps me to write better.. n yaa
this stry will contain more den two parts..may b 4-5 parts..so i changed it to a SS
PART 1-
NEXT DAY AT D ACADEMY-
All r present(guyzz sara is not dere..she is nt feeling well as we all knw..so she chose to stay back)
V:guyzz...i m vry tensed..i jus hope that d sponsores lyk our dance..
Sw: vicky chill dude..i knw now everything is gonna b alright..specially wen kria..he stps realizing dat he ws abt to tell everybdy that kria is cumng back
Sh:kria..wat abt her??
Sw:err..nthng...he sais hesitatingly
Sh:i knw u r hiding sumthing swyayam..now..out with the truth
Sw:umm..actually kria calld me yesterday..she told me dat she is now fine..one of d techniques finally workd..n when i told her abt all dis..she told me that she had
an idea..
Every1(except rey):wat..kria is cuming back..n she is fine
Sw:not only fine..she can dance too
Sh:OMG..i m soo happy..when is she cumng??
Sw:today..i m gonna go pick her up..she ll b here by 4 p.m.
V:no..swayam..u wont go to pick her up..all of us will..
Sw:no guyz..u cant..
Sh:kyun..only u arent her frnd..she is our frnd also..how can u say that..n sharon continued blabbering nt allowing to speak..swayam just moved towards her n kept his
finger on her lips to make her quiet..making her go in a trance
Sw:shhh..tabse bole jaa rhi ho..listen to me once..all i wanna say is that kria told me nt tell anybdy dat she is cuming..coz she wantd to surprise all of u..bt i gt
over excitd n took her name..dats y i want all of u to pretend dat u dnt knw anything abt it..datss it..as soon as he completed he realized wat he did..he quickly
stepped back n withdrew his finger making sharon cum outta her trance
Sw:srry..
Sh:its..kk
Sw:soo..guyzzz...kal milte hai..
All dis while rey sttod dere silently..he was ecstatic on hearing dat his baatcutter can dance again...bt was sad as soon as he realized dat he wont b able to dance
with her anymore..
R:guyzzz..i ll leave..kuch kaam hai ghar mein..sayng this he left.
V:isse kya hogya..shouldnt he b happy dat kria is back..guyzz i hv an idea..lets get dem together once kria is here...
As soon as vicky spoke dis..swayam angrily replied
Sw:no..no one is gonna try to bring dem together..
Sh:y..u knw na how muh dey luv each other..ohh i m soo srry i forgt dat u dnt knw wat love is..she completed in a sarcastic tone..
Sw:guyzz..i said that no..i mean no one will try to do so..n dats final..lets meet tmrw..n sharon i wanna talk to u b4 u leave
Sh:no..ur decesion is nt final..i ll try my level best to bring dem togther.
on hearing dis swayam lost his temper..n shoutd
Sw..dnt u dammit get it..NO ONE WILL TRY TO BRING THEM TOGETHER..
Every1:realizing dat d situation ws getting worse decided to leave..dey thought it was best if they didn't interfere n abt sharon..she was shocked..well shocked
cannot atually justify it..she never ever imagined swayam to speak to her in such a tone..she realized dat sumthing is grevely wrong dat swayam said so..realizing dat
every1 has left she questioned him..
Sh:tell me wats d matter..every1's gone now..
Sw:sharon..i m...
Sh;dnt..jus tell me wats the matter??
Sw:"okay..b4 i tell u anything jus wanna tell u dat i knw ki sara is ur cousin n rey is ur bestie n we arent in talking terms..bt i wanna request to keep all dese
things aside fr a while n jus listen to me..ok??
sharon ws confused. She could easily feel the tension in d air..n aftr wat swayam said,she was even more tensed
Sh:okay..go ahead
Sw:ok..so..yesterday..n he told her d evrything wat rey told him n abt there(reyam's) convo...n den continued.."may b u will feel dat rey is ryt..bt i..."
But sharon interupted him before he could complete n said angrily..
Sh:no..rey has crossed his limits..i knw we arent talking to each other..bt i wont deny d fact dat u r correct..i m with u..rey needs to b punished fr forgiving his
luv..n more then dat for forgiving d luv he ws showered onto by kria..
Sw:thanks a lot..n jus one more thing..i m gonna tell kria everything..i dnt want her to cling to any false hope...n i knw she'll be broken aftr all this..i ll b fr
her..bt may be she'll feel more comfortable in sharing her feelings to u..she never opened up in frnt of me whenever it ws abt rey..so i want u to comfort her..
Sh:u dnt need to tell me dat swayam...i m always dere fr her..
Sw:thnks..n umm..i m..i m srry..i shouldnt hv spoken to u lyk dat..
Sh:its kk..
Sw:no..it not ok..no matter wat d matter is..i cant speak to lyk dat..it was wrong on my part..
Sh:its kk..i knw..we dnt wanna talk to each other aftr wat happened b/w us..bt fr ur frnds..frnds??
Sw:I cant b frnds be with u sharon..either we r no one to each other or we r everything to each other..n seeing d present situation..we r team mates..u hv teamed
together to help one frnd of ours n make another frnd realize his mistake..he paused fr sumtym to see her reaction bt on getting no reaction he decided to leave..byee
i gotta go..kria ko lene jana hai..n he left frm leaving sharon alone to think about there(swaron's) relation.
I knw all of u expectd kriyam n kriyaansh meet..bt dis part ws important..n guyzz plz dnt think dat i m tryng to turn every1 against rey..i just wanted swaron to cum
together fr dis..dat y..
n yaa..in nxt update dere will b a new entry-karan...till den guess who he can b??
Edited by luvuKR - 9 years ago
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