New KR SS Story SO WHAT? TOH KYA?? Part 4 on pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Read it all...n I love it...I gotta update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Interesting concept.
Both swaron and kriyaansh love each other but didn't expressed it.
Now Rey planned to propose kriya.
Looking forward to read.
Update soon
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Shivani
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Hey Shirisha !
Nice chap
swaron love each other yayy!!
Want to read more
updae soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
amazing update
i loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awsome update
Both chapter
Amzing
Update next part fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice update👏
Rey wants Swayum 2 propose Sharon n Swayum wants Rey 2 propose Kriya...interesting😃
continue soon n pls PM me😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

Reyam reach canteen. Kriya was already there. Rey sits next to her and swayam accupies another table.

Rey: kriya... ah.. mujhe kuch batana hai..

Kriya: haan bol...

Rey: wo kriya.. main tujhe yah kehna chahta ha k..

Kria: rey, formal hona band kar, aur sidhe sidhe bol.

Rey: kriya, tuna, meri best friend hai!

Kriya: yeh baat mujhe nahi pata? Kuch naya nahi hai?

Rey: ah.. hai. Kriya, wo main... i..

Someone comes and informs that sharon has faint in the library. All three of them rush. Took her to hospital. Swayam was really afraid. Kriyaansh consoled him. There doctor informs that Sharon is very weak and not taking her diet properly. They went to sharon.

Kriya: kyun kar rhi ho tum aisa?

Rey: kyun nahi kha rhi khana thik se?

Swayam: kyun nhi rakh rhi apna khayal?

Sharon(to swayam): none of ur business.

Rey: Sharon!

Sharon: what?

Rey: behave ur self!

Swayam: I just care for u...

Sharon: why the hell? Just stay out of my life ok? Just mind ur own business!

Kriya was about to say something...

Swyam: tum dono bahar jao.

Sharon: yeh dono kahin nahi jayenge.

Swaym: guys, go.

Sharon: never. Stay here.

Swayam: I said, leave!

Kriyaansh leave.

Sharon: what the hell?

Swayam: shut up! Just shut up ok? Khud ko samajhti kya ho tum? Koi kuch kehta nahi ha toh jo marzi karogi? Why don't u understand sharon, agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh, koi nahi jee payega. Na rey, na kriya aur na ma...

He stopped and she looked in his deep eyes. He ws having lots of love and care in it. He keeps her hand on her cheek.

Swayam: sirf ek hadse ki wajah se kyun apni life spoil karna chahti ho? U don't know how special u r.. plz don't do this...

Sharon had tears but she moved his hand out of her face.

Sharon: yeh meri life hai aur main khud decide karungi k mujhe kya karna hai aur kya nahi. Isse tumhe koi fark nahi padna chahiye.

Swayam: fark padta hai. Bht fark padhta hai. Uknow i..

Sharon: u what? U what swayam?

Swayam: u know very well what I mean.

Sharon: just go away swayam. Chale jao. Leave me alone.

Swyam: I cant!

Sharon: lekin kyun?

Swayam: Because I love u damn it! Pyar karta hun main tumse, nahi jee sakta tumhare bina!

There was a silence for sometime. Both were lost in each other's eyes.

Swayam: look sharon, I love u aur yeh baat sab jante hain, and even u. maine aaj tak confess nahi kiya kyun k main tumhe time dena chahta tha, but now, it needs to be over. And the fact is, I love u!

Sharon: stop all this swayam and mujhe mere haal par chod do. Mujhe kiske sahare ki zaroorat nahi hai!

Swayam: zaroorat hai. Agar nahi hoti toh aaj tum hospital me nahi hoti, got it?

Sharon: Fine. But main tumhe accept nahi kar sakti.

Swayam: kyuun nahi kar sakti? Sharon saare ladke ek jaise nahi hote!

Sharon: I know swayam, par..

Swyam: par kya? Kisis aur se pyar karti ho?

Sharon: what rubbish? Tum jante ho aisa kuch nahi hai.

Swaym: phir kyun accept nahi kar sakti tum mujhe? Main janta hun k tum aaj b uske liye roti ho, but sharon.. kya tum sach much aaj b use chahti ho?

Sharon: aisa nahi hai swyam par main use bhula b nahi payi hun.

Swayam: ek baar life me aage badh jaogi, toh sabkuch automatically bhul jaogi. Koshis toh kar ke dekho.

Sharon: swayam main janti hun tum bht ache ho. Aur meri life me uski jagah lene chahte ho par...

Swayam: ek sec. mene kab kaha k main uski jagah lena chahta hun? Sharon, main tumhare dil main apne liye jagah banana chahta hun. Aur wo main banakar rahunga. And I promise jab tak tum khud aakar mujhe I love u nahi kaehti, main iss baare me tumse baat nahi karunga. We r friends ok? So uncomfort feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

He smiles and leaves. Sharon looks at him without blinking till her steps out of the room.

Outside

Rey: I just cant believe k Sharon itni irresponsible ho sakti hai!

Kriya: unbeleivalbe rey! Tujhe khudpe gussa aana chahiye k tu uska khayal nahi rakha paya.

Rey: tujhe kya lagta hai? Maine apni tara se kuch nahi kiya? Kriya main 24*7 uske saath rehta tha. Lekin usne khud kaha k she will take careof herself. But usne aisa naihi kiya. She broke my promise. Galat kiya usne mere saath.

Kriya: rey, tu uski situation janta hai. She loved him.

Rey: so what? I love u too. Aur main janta hun k tu mujhe kabhi accept nahi karegi. Lekin main break hua nahi na? coz i...

Just then rey realised that he just confessed his love for her. It was really an awkward moment. They were not able to look in each other's eyes. Rey turned and saw swayam coming out.

Rey: kaisi hai ab?

Swayam: better. Tu ek kaam kar, tu kriya ko ghar drop kar de. Main sharon k pass rukta hun.

Rey: swayam: tu chod de kriya ko, sharon ko meri zarurat padh sakti hai.

Swyam: haan toh main hun na yahan. Mujhpar trust nahi hai kya?

Rey:nahi yaar aisa nahi hai par..

Swayam: par war kuch nahi tu...

Kriya: guys, guys, relax! Tum dono ruk jao. Main taxi se chali jayiungi.

Reyam: No!

They looked at each other.

Swayam: tu akele nahi jayegi. Rey will drop u..!

Kriyaansh had a eyelock.

Swayam:(in mind) yeh dono jitna saath rahen utna acha hai, isse Rey k0 chance milega. Main use nahi bata sakta k maine Sharon ko I love u bol diya hai, nahi toh wo promise se mukal jayega.

Rey:(in mind) kaise batayun swayam ko k maine kriya ko propose kar diya hai, aura b use yeh sab karne ki zarurat nai hai. Kaise yaad dilayun use uska promise? (to kriya) Chal, main chod deta hun.


to be continued...


Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice update.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Wajah shiri kya baat hai 👏
Dono confessions woh bhi achanak 😲

Last reyam part was funny 😆

I hope swaron love story aage bade jaldi jaldi

Update soon !!

Thanks for the PM 😊

Love ,
Lavi 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
This is really sweet..
Reyam are too good..
Both confessed..
But for each other sake..they are not gonna reveal it soon..

Update soon
Thanks 4 d pm
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