New KR SS Story SO WHAT? TOH KYA?? Part 4 on pg 14 - Page 2

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Amazing prologue...

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Nyc conncept!
Kriya n rey r besties.
Kriya is tomboyish n sharon is d girly one.
Rey loves kriya n swayam loves sharon.
Kriya knows that rey loves her. While sharon is ignorant of swayam's feelings.
Let's see what happens next!
Excited about this one. Continue soon!
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Awesome concept 👏

Lovely CS 😊

Interesting prologue 😃

KR 😳 ...Kria and Rey besties 😳 😉
Waiting for their love to blossom 😆

SS 😊 ...Swayam loves Sharon but Sharon is confused 😲

Amazing start 😃
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Part 1

He entered the rehearsal hall and looked at her talking in phone. He (don't know why) started having tears just seeing her. He moved toward and kept his hand on her shoulder. She dropped her phone seeing him.

She: tum...

He: (putting his fingers on her lips)shhh...! Kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai...

She: par.. yeh galat hai!

He: kya? Main tumse pyar karta hun... tum mujhse karti ho, phir kya galat hai?

She: pyar apni jagah thik hai. par apni families ki taraf b hamari kuch duties hain, responsibility hai... hume apni family k bare me b sochna hoga...

He: wahi toh kar raha hun... ab meri family me tum bhi shamil ho chuki ho!

She got tears.

He: main wada karta hun, tumpar kabhi koi aanch nahi aane dunga, tumhe apni palkon k chaaon me rakhunga... main tumse had se b zyada pyar karunga... laut aao mere paas...

She hugged him tightly n he hugged back.

Soon they heard claps n broke d hug.

Vicky: Dekha mene kaha tha na, yeh role inse better koi nahi kar sakta..

Nil: han... SWAYAM n SHARON r just best!!!

Sharon: kuch b ho... tum log naya intzaam karo.. main apna phn baar baar nahi gira sakti aise...

Swayam: aur min apni studies aur neglect nahi kar sakta...

Simmi: annual function tak kit oh baat hai... come on!

Bharat; abhi bht late ho gaya hai ghar chalet hain...

All leaves except SwaRon. They were packing their Stuffs. Soon Swayam's phne ring.

Swayam: REY???

Sharon comes near him hearing the name. Swayam receives.

Swayam: hello! Han... kya? Kyun? Par.. acha Kahan?? Ok... main aata hun...

Sharon: ah.. kya hua?

Swayam: raste me batata hun.

SwaRon reach at the place. There they saw a girl in jeans and T-shirt with a cap biting a guy.

SwaRon: KRIYA!!!!!!

She stopped, looked at them and continued to bit. SwaRon went to her and tried to drag her.

Swayam: kriya chod...

Sharon: leave him yaar.

Kriya: nahi! Isne meri friend ko comment pass kiya, main ise nahi chodungi.

Sharon: chod do kriya plz...

Kriya: nahi Sharon, tum log jao.

Swayam: kriya tumhe meri ksan hai!

She stopped.

Swayam: jane do use.

The boy runs.

Swayam: kab sudhregi tu kriya?

Kriya: mujhe sudharni ki koi zarurat b nahi hai bhai,aur tum baar baar mujhe aise mat toka karo...

Swaym: aaj toh thik hai par kal agar kuch...

Kriya: kuch nahi hoga Swayam. Tum tension lena band karo.

Swayam: dekho kriya, aaj k baad koi b aisi baat mujhe pata chali na, toh main tumse baat nahi karunga.

Kriya: par swayam...

Swayam: Kriya, it's final! Chalo Sharon.

Sharon: Rey kahan hai?

Kriya(confused): Rey???

Swayam(trying to avoid): chalo chalo!

He leaves followed by Sharon.

Kriya turns her eyes all around and sees Rey trying to escape.

Kriya: Rukh!!!

He stops.

Krriya: tune bataya na bhai ko?

Rey: ma.. maine? Na..

Kriya: Jhoot mat bolna!

Rey: haan...

Kriya: kyun?

Rey: kyun na batata? Tu hamesha aisi harkaten karti rehti hai, agar tujhe kuch...

Kriya: rey yaar plz. Ab tu lecture dena suru mat kar de.

Rey: main...

She leaves putting her finger in her ears.

Rey: kriya...!!

He follows him.

College, class room

Rey: Tum inti beautiful kyun ho?

Girl: Rey... u are making me blush...

Rey: oh... u look more beautiful blushing with this red lipstick...!!!

Suddenly he feels a slap.

Rey: what the...

He looks at the person and shows his teeth.

He again gets a slap.

Rey: kya kar raha hai yaar..

He again slaps him.

Rey: are bas kar..

He was again going to slap and he holds hand.

Rey: kya kar raha hai Swayam main rey hun, tera friend.

Swayam: uss ladki k saath flirt karte time bhool gaya tha k main Swayam hun, tera friend? Kaminne, meri behen se pyar karne ka dawa karta hai aur yahan...

Rey: are yaar, yahi toh problem hai, teri behen man jati toh yeh boring ka time pass nahi karna padhta...

Swayam: what?

Rey: kuch nahi..

They sit in the bench.

Swayam: Rey, tu kriya ko bachpan se janta hai, pyar k naam se chidti hai wo, phir b tu use itna chahta hai?

Rey: Pyar aur Shaadi k liye toh Sharon b readynahi hai... par tune hope choda? Nahi na? Swyam tujhe nahi lagta, hum dono ki situation bilkul same hai?

Swayam: kaise?

Rey: dekh. Hum dono bff hain, hamari sis' ek dusre ki, hum dono ek dusre ki sis par lattu hain, aur wo dono hume ghaas nahi dalti...

Swayam: not exactly,. Wo atttension nahi deti coz, hum koshis nahi karte...

Rey: han par...

All of a sudden the class became silent. They looked here and there, all the guys were looking toward the door. They saw KriSha coming.

Kriya goes to a bench and scolds a boy.

Kriya: kya re? tereko pata nahi yeh hamari sit hai? Chal baaju hat!

He leaves. Sharon uncomfortably stands in front of the first bench. Rey gets up from their facing the guys. Their heads move down. He let Sharonsit near kriya and comes back.

Sharon: God!

Kriya: why disturbing him? U look so beautiful,aur make up k baad aur b pretty lagti ho, toh dekhenge hi na?

Sharon: kriya, tu meri taarif kar rhi ho ya unhe support?

Kriya: NOcomments!!!

Sharon: What??

They laughs.

Rey comes and sit.

Rey: inki aankhen thak nahi jaati?

Swaym: merit oh nahi thakti...

Both smile.'

Rey: meri se teri behen achi hai yaar... beautiful hote hue b use koi nahi dekhta...

Swayam: except you...

Rey: what???

They laughs too.

To be continued...

It's a short update but tried my best. Hope u all like it. Ready for all chappals n tomatoes!!!!

Love,

Shirisha

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