|Unscripted Love| ~ KR Short Story (Part 11: page 53) - Page 8

awesome update

AWSUM UPDATE..hawt n intreasting..srsly fab

Awesome I loved this story...

I m reading it frm d start...I was inactive...

I loved the concept...

Choosing the wrong person...Gangsters...

Reyaansh Aaravs Rival...

Meeting Kriya...n dn d drive home...

pehli hi meet main kiss...

Hospital scene...i loved it...

I loved the scene whr he says he loves whr she keeps her phn...n dn removin it frm der...hehe...awesome...

Icecream date wow...

Waiting for nxt update...will surely comment...

Soory for late comments...

Love Aditi.

👏

Rey is so naughty
And kriya is so innocent
They are attracted by each other
And their meet was fab
Their romance was fab
They are going on a ice cream date
Would love to see what will happen in the date

Waiting for next update

Thanx for pm

Continue soon

fantastic part!!👏

Amazing FF,interesting story,its was hott update,so kriya bf n rey r gangsters,loved it,do cont soon n pls add me to ur pm list :)

oh just i luved it

Wow mannu this was amazing

finish read your both 2 and 3 parts together... finally some what
both are feel for each other ... awesome and sweet lovely momnets...
do continue soon