|Unscripted Love| ~ KR Short Story (Part 11: page 53) - Page 24

horse race...interesting...
seems like rey is really liking kriya...till now i thot its jst a game to him...
poor aarav...wrong timing...
though its obvious that rey called...but did he really...???
jaanne ke liye keep bugging mannu madam for update

Res. Gonna unres tomorrow, pakka se.

woww this s getting interesting

Yaayyy
finally the update is here...
horse race was damn interesting
the update was fab !
Kriya's entry was the best part... sahi time pe entry hui
her concern for Rey n he is enjoying this to the fullest ...hahahh
I loved this line: "Rey is my priority for the moment."
btw,now who is this third person...
waiting for the next part
update soon !

hey mannu...

first and foremost loved it ...superb...
wow..it was worthwatching...

amazing...

keep writting...

Awesome update

Wonderful update. .
is rey a negative role in this story?

amazing!!!! 😃

earlier I had thought they will go to see horse race ... n they will bet on them... 🤣

but no... they are themselves racing... 😆

cheapo aarav ... what will he get by doing this ... 😵

he himself lost respect from kriya ... such an idiot ... 😛

awww... sweet girlfriend kriya ... 🤗

kriyaansh scene nhi mila khul ke ... 😭

aahhh... this story is so engaging ... trust me... 🥳

whenever I read its update... I wish it never end...

just read your this parts... it was awesome... someone plan failed...

Tuna itni jaldi update deti h ki kya bolu 😡
agala part kab degi i m.dieing to.read it