awesome drabbles
you are indeed a superb writer
coming to the drabbles
each one is awesome
PERMANENCE
well drunk d3 boys
shantanu poor soul was initially happy
dat he hadn't pierced his brows or ears
but poor guy he had permanently
made vrushika a part of him
this one was totally not a
believable situation in real lives
but girl! you made us believe and visualize it
superb and brisk writing
PERCEPTION
i felt like the whole visuals playing right in front of my eyes
shantanu's confused feelings
on seeing vrushika with someone else
poor guy...
yup vrushika is sweet like that
and aww their bonding
shantanu; despite being angry on vrushika had to remind himself to show his frustration
and vrushika... she is unaffected by the things around her
the last line ...
He would give in. He always did...thats true
i have watched that iv like a 100 times
this drabble was really cute
felt like reality
PERSUASION
vrushans honeymoon
the girl is putting end all plans of her husband
and shantanu this guy has to undergo a lot of emotions due to this girl
vrushika and her concept of honeymoons
well one can surely expect the girl to say something like this
indeed only she can
shantanus stream of ideas and vrushika effortlessly ruining each. "Honeymoons are for eating and long naps, and visiting tourist spots."
"Was it something I said?"
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i was litteraly rofling at this
you are superb
please keep updating
would love to read more
p.s: your vms are superb continue with it
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