Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Oh My My!!!!
You just write so well :)
This was just so good :)
Vrushika so innocent and Shantanu all confused.. ..With his own feelings. . .The way you penned down things are beautiful :)
Amazing job :)
I loved the last line a lot. . .and your thought behind it made it even more soothing :)
Keep Writing :)
Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON
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editedWell the first it was hmmm where is that word I am looking for ah anyways can't find itcuz it's hilarious 😆Well yeah even if you were showing that Shan is sad or showing his emotions in saddness and the possessiveness and all but still I laugheddon't know why :|and in the end well it was adorable and lovely 😊
Originally posted by: LaalIshq
Ahhh jst amazing...Vrushika is such an innoceny kid...n angry young man Shantanu..
U kill it in every writting...
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
amazing..
confused shantanu...
lovely vrushi..
well done
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